Someone discovers the SYOC Shadow War and gets pissy. Otherwise, nothing of note.
A lot of unremarkable OT fic. There is one real-world fic about Japan using pokemon to take over the world, but the first chapter ends before that happens because the author decided to spend all their time on genealogy instead; and a “realistic” fic set in a pokemon world without pokemon, because that makes sense.
Let’s take a look at our large cast and what we got to know about them in the intro route.
“In the future, however, I would ask that you please refrain from leaving reviews that barely touch on the content, whether for my stories or for others. Your review here was 9:1 critique to content, with only that little bit at the end, which itself was even half about the writing itself rather than content. I’m open to critique (and it’s helpful when readers point out typos, plot inconsistencies, thematic problems, or whatever else since I’m only human and I make mistakes), though I may not agree with the concrit the way I respectfully disagree with almost all of yours. But I also think there’s an unspoken etiquette we should all try our best to follow on these sites regardless of whether concrit is sound or not. Reviews are great to receive and so is concrit, but when authors put in the work to produce stories, whether excellent or clearly novice and in need of improvement, it’s kind of nice to hear feedback about the actual content of the story. Everyone from professional writers to amateurs wants this when they share their work with the world. Even though this is just the first chapter and not much yet has happened, as you correctly pointed out, it’s still polite to try to follow that unspoken guideline as much as possible. As it stands, I have only the faintest idea of whether or not you even liked the chapter, if you are interested in where it could be going, thoughts on characterization, or any other number of content-related issues that are important for me to hear about as a writer. Whether or not you accept my suggestion is entirely up to you, of course. But just to be clear, if I get more reviews or PMs from you that are similar to this one, I probably won’t reply. To do so would waste even more time than I already have on this response.”
Another author makes a similar argument in this very batch. Were authors always this entitled, or is this a new thing?
We do get an author who’s genuinely interested in portraying pokemon as people, though, so that’s a plus.
Some slightly better than average stuff today, and two fics that really don’t seem to understand the implications of talking pokemon. So much anime fic, though. What more must I do?
There’s still some more extras that pop up after finishing the Tea Party.
“Capital letters are only at the start of names of people/pets, or names of places like ‘Paris’ or ‘London’, or even words to describe something. A title that could contain 7 words wouldn’t have capitalized letters at the start of every word if they weren’t names of people, pets, of places. For example, ‘Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows’. Harry and Potter have capitalized letters at the start because they are names. ‘Deathly’ and ‘Hallows’ have capitalized letters because they are important items so they’re in the title and their name has a capital D because it is part of the name and it describes something.”
A Black/White novelization, a fic about how pokephiliacs are just as oppressed as gay people, and something about the legendaries that might have been interesting if it hadn’t used stream-of-consciousness as an excuse for incoherence. Also, a lot of anime fic.
Before we get into final thoughts, we have some extras to wrap up. This time, the OOC review session.
I’ve done smarter things in my life. Once, for example, I threw myself out of a moving car in order to take on a truckload of lycanthropes singlehandedly. That had been nominally smarter. At least I had been fairly certain that I could kill them, if I had to, at the time.
That’s really not how that went down.
God, the “last time on” things in this series are always so annoying. (more…)
So it turns out I should have waited until the end of the month after all. The “Guardians” story just updated with a Kidra-centric chapter; if you’d like to check it out, I’ve updated the most recent charapost.
I attempt to explain the moral pitfalls of Nuzlocke to an author.
“And, news flash, people kill people all the time. It’s a part of life.”
It is like water off a duck’s back.
“Last thing is that this is a fanfic. The writer has the power to change or manipulate things from the story. For example I cold make it so Guzma never joined team skull. This is what a fanfic is. So if you don’t like mine, then you may find another one.”
Also, I get an anti-revenge review!
Basically everything today was incoherent or anime fic, but there is a Nuzlocke with a pokemon whisperer protagonist. No deaths yet, but that promises to be a ride.
This isn’t an actual review, just a WOOOO post to note that Obelisk Gate took the 2017 Hugo for best novel! It totally deserved it, this series may be the best trilogy I’ve ever read, it’s absolutely incredible, this is not an exaggeration. The final book, Stone Sky, just came out and was equally as good so seriously, go read them!
I look forward to Jemisin taking the 2018 Hugo for Stone Sky and giving her a three-year win streak. No contemporary writer deserves these accolades more.
Neckbeards must be losing their shit.