St. Elmo's Fire

  • Good responses today.

    re: Your review to Another Experiment
    5 OctHansCampanella
    A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13083600/

    Hello! Thank you very much for your review and […]

  • So I’m gonna make a Blaze Masterpost here just so I can link back to it instead of hunting stuff down every time.

    I reviewed Dragon’s Blaze’s story “United Destiny” during NaRe 2018. She responded two months later to take umbrage with the Arceus-as-God bit, and I told her to take it to the thread.

    Here are her posts in the religion thread.…[Read more]

  • A neat oneshot about the Lake fairies, a decent SuMo novelization, and a lot of incoherence.

    Anime count: 5

    Hi! I’m doing a round of reviews around the site, hoping to help give people constructive c […]

    • Isn’t Lillie also extremely underage? If you’re aging her up for this, you need to note that somewhere.

      I think she’s 12, which is underage even for Japan. Can’t confirm if that’s canon or not but should have had the underage tag as well then.

      In any case, I’m not touching it with a ten foot barge pole.

      • Well, the protagonist is 11 and Lillie doesn’t look like her age is that much different. Definitely needs the underage tag if they’ve not indicated they’re aging her up. 

    • There isn’t fighting, Blaze. You decided you didn’t want us in fandom so you PM and review and post about us. You want that to stop, then you can stop.

    • How extraordinarily convenient that they all agreed. It’s almost as convenient as how you just troll-reviewed that story I reviewed by saying St Elmo’s Fire was nuts, that you don’t use alts… and then proceeded to hilariously prove him right by using those same alts merely hours apart from each other, each with your same broken English. You do know that real people have actual lives beyond acting to your every beck and call, right?

      We’re not doing anything, this is all you. We’re just trying to help people. You’re just trying to screw us over, even if it means screwing over the people we’re trying to help out. But it’s not too late to stop. Please do. 

    • Blaze, I don’t know what part of no, I won’t agree to demands just because you harass me is so confusing. You want to keep arguing in the reviews and making fresh sockpuppets for all time, fine. You can stop the bullshit you’re doing by stopping. It’d be great if you just weren’t a horrible person who harasses others, but I’m satisfied with the knowledge that the time you waste harassing us is time don’t have for harassing someone else.

      Edit: Huh, why’d you delete your stuff? Were you still insisting Emp United isn’t you?

      • I do wonder why you do this, still. It can’t be easy to so obsessively stalk us, and it can’t be a stressless endeavor either. It was never about review quality, everyone who is serious about writing or not too proud to admit that they aren’t perfect or that their story isn’t perfect acknowledges our aid as being helpful. This was never about saving people from the evils of our constructive criticism, this was always about your inability to accept that you might be wrong. And again, we’re not stupid. You can play pretend about how hard it was to convince them… but we know it’s you. Same person, different accounts, made at different times. We know it’s you. We know. No amount of your pretending that they’re actual people that aren’t you could ever even come close to fooling us. They always respond, on the same story, all within hours of each other. Real, actual people have lives, where they can’t be at the computer all the time or have schedule conflicts that would make such consistent support impossible. Grow up and accept that you were wrong. You don’t have to do it to us, but you’ll thank yourself later if you just let this vendetta go.

        • You came here with what you knew wouldn’t happen so you could pretend to have the moral high ground. Pretty typical behavior of you. Well, bye. I won’t miss you.

    • “Do what I say and I’ll stop” continues to not be how compromise works, Blaze.

    • Same syntax and it’s well within the range she’s shown. The ridiculous autocorrect stuff generally goes with her rapidfire posts. That’s why it’s so prevalent in her reviews, she’s got to go fast to post, log out, post, log out, post, log out…

  • What’s often the case here is that those women are in the same position as you, and can’t afford to rock the boat even if they’re upset. There’s not much solution aside from granting greater economic stability and independence to the working poor (so, destroying capitalism).

  • More weirdness: The anti-CU spammer has upgraded to using sockpuppets for signed reviews that can’t be deleted. They continued making a ton more socks you can see by going through the user ID numbers.

  • Someone’s frustrated by Hybrid bringing drama. Responses are otherwise appreciative.

    re: Your review to Right Your Wrongs
    30 SepCoroKoro
    A response to your review at […]

  • As I keep saying, this does not even do much to slow me down. Even if she can get everyone on a given day to block me, I can just keep going. The authors are the ones getting spooked by the conflict and trying to batten down the hatches to keep it out.

  • A well-done tragic short, and otherwise nothing of note.

    Anime count: 5

    Blocked, previously reviewed. Anime.

    KingPyle is a sockpuppet of lstwill56, who was banned on my sister’s forum for using racial slurs […]

    • The new authors will be just fine. It’s Elmo I’m more worried about.

      • As I keep saying, this does not even do much to slow me down. Even if she can get everyone on a given day to block me, I can just keep going. The authors are the ones getting spooked by the conflict and trying to batten down the hatches to keep it out.

    • I hope it doesn’t so I can get a bunch of absurd reviews on my next story and pad the counter

  • She is also now claiming that Grammar Girl is bunk, because it’s so different? Tempted to also cite Grammarly just to see what she says to it.

    Edit: Oh my, yes. I’m doing this.

  • Mostly appreciative, one really tepid revenge review.

    re: Your review to Perfect Son
    27 Septogwtos
    A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13075550/

    Thank you for your review! I […]

  • A few interesting things, but also a lot of rote stuff.

    Anime count: 7

    Hi! I’m doing a round of reviews around the site, hoping to help give people constructive criticism instead of just vague appreciation o […]

  • A two-step process is convoluted. Do any of the other vampires work this way?

  • That is incredibly unnecessarily convoluted, and sounds like it was made just so Susan could survive this.

  • “I have seen that you also use bad grammar yourself, you hypocrite […] you use “I’m” instead of “I am” and “don’t” instead of “do not” to give mention to your poor grammar, as well as you typing “pokemon” when […]

    • Sadly, this is what haters do. 

      I don’t get why people get this upset. I thanked Elmo for his review, especially since he pointed out things I missed. 

      Or, if you don’t like the review, just ignore it. It isn’t that difficult…

    • [Not to mention you use “I’m” instead of “I am” and “don’t” instead of “do not” to give mention to your poor grammar, as well as you typing “pokemon” when it should be spelt “Pokémon” (capital “P” and a “é” instead of an “e”).]

      I am not one who usually gives fucks to this type of shit, but hell am I going to let this slide. You have to be a native speaker of a different language to argue something like that, come on now. Using “I’m” or whatever is nothing negative; in fact, it’s correct. If someone ever said that to me then I’ll do one thing: school them. Should have told him to delete his account, along with his “I’ms and do not.” Also yes, pokemon is spelled as “pokémon,” but not all people have the é on their keyboard, nor are we going to waste our lives for an e.

      Also, also no! You don’t always capitalize the P in pokemon as it is also the name for the creatures, not just the title of the series.

      You guys should make an Everything Wrong With Fanfic Writers. Lol

  • Sorry, you’re sounding like Hybrid now, so you get to go back to doing more important things for a while. Have fun! If you’re not Hybrid, you can tell her it’s her fault for using an IP spoofer so no one can prove they’re not her.

  • Are you someone I reviewed?

  • I’m offended you think I can’t multitask.

  • An author I liked before posted a new story! Pickings were otherwise pretty average. Even our token pokescrewing fic is only moderately creepy. There is one weird thing about the gods acting like high schoolers, […]

    • For instance, in the journey fic “Gods and Demons”

      *_* ILU

  • “Oh I’m a very immature person. But can be mature when I need to be. I just don’t take this seriously.”

    Ha
    20 SepHeraldicEntertainment
    A response to your review at […]

  • Well, that’s the thing. Maybe they are people in your version of the ‘verse, maybe they aren’t. How should we define “person”, exactly? I consider something that displays self-awareness and higher intelligence to have personhood. In canon, pokemon have those traits, in addition to possessing language.

    Maybe you really do mean to say pokemon…[Read more]

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