The Other Pokeauthors, Part 142

Some weirdly belated revenge reviews, and otherwise polite responses.

re: Your review to Hellbound Dollhouse, A pokemon horror fanfiction
23 Novmckanto
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13128401/

Starting off, thank you very much for taking the time to review my story. Even though English isn’t my mother language, I’m going to be more careful on my grammar and syntax and thank you again for pointing out those errors to me. I capitalized the first letter of the pokemon, however, because I remember that in games and throughout the anime (subbed) they were always putting the names with the first letter capital. Therefore, I did the same. Also, while I really appreciate your review on my first chapter, I want to set it up in a way that I envisioned. Even if most readers will find it boring, there is going to be a handful of people who will appreciate my approach in the story. Again thank you for your review.

re: Your review to [REDACTED]
24 NovA response to your review at [REDACTED]

Thank you for your review, I currently don’t have a beta reader so I’m not operating at peak efficiency, Ill fix these things eventually no need to worry :) and that other guy trying to call you out for actually giving good reviews and criticism is just a you know what haha, Thank you for the compliment at the end though, I have some other chapters written out and I had plans to come back and flesh out this passage later once I had more of an idea of where its going. Care to leave a review letting people know I got back to you and there’s more content coming? If not I understand I wouldn’t force you to take time out of you day. Again, thank you for the honest review!

St Elmo’s Fire,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Pearl
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: TheFerengiKing ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10048660/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=266016770
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Hello, you should know who I am and how I’m going to throw my own spew of BC at you:

You should capitalize Pokémon and any of the following species of it as it has been shown in grammar articles to do so.

You should mark down characters in this story as whether it be actual characters or OC because there may be few people on here who might complain that there’s a character they don’t like here.

Anything that has Pokémon related subjects should also be capitalized.

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St Elmo’s Fire,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Blood is Thicker than Water
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: TheFerengiKing ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10048660/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=266016805
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You should capitalize Pokémon and the species of them, it has been shown by grammar articles that it is correct.

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What’s bizarre is that I haven’t talked to this person since April. Not sure what motivated them to do this now. Tragically I am blocked, so their definitely real evidence will have to remain a mystery.

re: Your review to [REDACTED]
25 NovA response to your review at [REDACTED]

First off I’m going to say sorry for all the flack you’re getting by other people. I don’t understand it and I much prefer if I wasn’t involved I just came to this site because I thought it would be a better place for my Pokemon stories then Wattpad as I already have a few stories(and two Pokemon stories) on there. Hopefully this wasn’t a mistake.

Now onto my actual message, [REDACTED for identifying details] Most of the grammar inputs are appreciated as I did read over my own chapter before publishing, but could have missed stuff. Also I added a few things before publishing and it was late at night. Next is the whole dialogue thing. I learned differently from my creative writing teacher so the way I write it is how I learned. Lastly this is a new thing to me as I usually write on Wattpad and I wrote these stories based off of the games and I was trying to stay true to the games so it may sound weird because that’s how I want to tell my story. It’s short because that’s how I wanted it to be.

This next part is kinda just me speaking my own mind so it’s fine if you don’t pay any mind to it. I appreciate the comment, but none of it was actually good. Yes you gave me a lot of editing, but you didn’t tell me what you liked about it thus making it more like you were pointing out my flaws then seeing the good and then adding in the editing tips. This isn’t constructive criticism it’s more like editing it from the comments. Please understand I accept your comment and it was actually quite nice. Have a good night(day depending on when you read this.)

secs ago[This isn’t constructive criticism it’s more like editing it from the comments.]

That is constructive criticism. I consider those edits very important. If you were able to take something productive from it, that is constructive. I’m sorry you were disappointed, but reviewers are not obligated to say nice things about your story.

6m agoI’m not disappointed I’m just a little hurt that you think my story is so bad that their was nothing good to say about it. Reviewers are supposed to encourage writers by pointing out what they did well as well as the flaws or else you’ll discourage the writer from posting.
You’re not obligated to review.
secs ago[Reviewers are supposed to encourage writers by pointing out what they did well]

I’m sorry, but no, reviewers aren’t “supposed” to do anything. A review is just for someone to express their view on a story. If that view is not positive, they are still allowed to say it. If you want to be on a website with a public comment feature, you have to accept that not everyone is going to say nice things all the time. That’s just how it is.

4m agoRead the last sentence.
secs agoYes, I understand. I review because I choose to, not because I have to.
1m agoThanks for understanding have a good day(or night)

56 Comments

  1. N says:
    … I did this pointed out that it’s pointless right? Hiding the users.

    Also, you only review because your an asshole.

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    1. Marshall Lee the Espeon King says:
      And you review to commit slander and attack forums because you love to stir shit.
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      1. N says:
        First, I never lie with thereviews. Two, never lie with my warnings (unlike a certain other group does) Three, you kept bringing it up yourselves.
        1. Roc says:
          [First, I never lie with thereviews.]

          You keep saying faulty grammar/spelling advice (i.e. “its and it’s”, saying that a mispelled word is correct, etc.). You and your group love hyping up Grammarly, despite constantly saying advice that is contradictory to it. Whenever Elmo brings up any missing apostrophes or commas, you scream against him.

          Honestly, Hybrid, are you really that desperate?

          [Two, never lie with my warnings]

          Hybrid, your very own profile keeps saying that Elmo’s account was deleted by the admins, yet that never happened. As I mentioned before, that “proof” you posted doesn’t actually prove anything.

          [Three, you kept bringing it up yourselves.]

          If you take a look at most of the newer stories, the first review is a warning from either your cousin or Fire4Heaven. You also mention repeatedly about how you PM authors too.

          Hybrid, go away. You are wasting everyone’s time, even your own. You are not welcome here, there people in your group are not welcome here, and your bad arguments are most certainly not welcome here.

          And before you argue, here’s an example of you insulting the author because they didn’t block Elmo.

          https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13135313/

          It really speaks for itself.

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          1. N says:

            You keep saying faulty grammar/spelling advice

            No I don’t.

            You and your group love hyping up Grammarly, despite constantly saying advice that is contradictory to it.

            none of what I say is wrong according to it.

            Hybrid, your very own profile keeps saying that Elmo’s account was deleted by the admins, yet that never happened. 

            I said he’s account should be deleted.

            Hybrid, go away. You are wasting everyone’s time, even your own. You are not welcome here, there people in your group are not welcome here, and your bad arguments are most certainly not welcome here.

            No. 

            1. N says:
              No St you need need it.
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        2. First, I never lie with thereviews.

          You just said it was okay to write child porn of pokemon trainers because they’re teenagers, not little kids. In addition to teenagers still being underage, the protagonists of the Alola games, in which the fic was set, are 11.

          Authors have literally been bullied into suicide over this. Telling these authors they have nothing to worry about is criminally irresponsible. Stop it.

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          1. N says:

            Authors have literally been bullied into suicide over this. 

            No they haven’t St and you know this.

             

            The last person you cried aboout it laughed at you anyway.

            1. Can’t help but notice you did not even acknowledge my point about teenagers still being underage.

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    2. So, what, you expect me to stop anonymizing them? Precisely how stupid do you think I am?

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      1. N says:

        Precisely how stupid do you think I am?

        A lot actually. You do it every week you know.

        1. Sevenways, you spend even more time spamming than I do reviewing. If I’m stupid, what does that make you?

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            1. Okay, then. You spend more time, let’s generously call it posting, than I do. If posting is stupid, why are you doing it so much more than me?

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            2. N says:
              I only counter review you.

               

              Please stop being a crazy idiot.

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            3. Embershine says:

              {I only counter review you.}

              LOL, what? You counter review a list of like ten people! Including people who aren’t a part of this blogs admin group, and just happen to disagree with you/interact with them! This is a new level of bullcrap, Hybrid.

              Even if we don’t take into account the sockpuppets, you personally, the Hybrid of Fate account, counter review tons of good authors who give well meaning reviews.

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            4. N says:

              Even if we don’t take into account the sockpuppets

              And you proved that your point doesn’t matter when you decided to cry the false sockpuppet nonsense.

              Next time think elmo’s.

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            5. Embershine says:

              Um, no. Address my main point instead of deflecting with the sock puppet issue. The Hybrid of Fate account counter reviews many people, including those who don’t agree with Saint’s capitalization standards and the Arceus as God stance. Claiming otherwise is a flat out lie.

              Are you capable of taking responsibility for the actions of the Hybrid of Fate account?

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            6. N says:
              You act like its an issue when Elmo’s does the same anyway.
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            7. Roc says:
              Reviewing and counter-reviewing (including direct insults towards authors) are not the same thing, Hybrid.
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            8. Hey Sevenways, if you don’t want to answer Embershine’s questions you can answer mine. Do you think it’s okay for adults to bang teenagers?

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            9. N says:

               you can answer mine

              Apologize to me first for the unwanted flame review you gave me.

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            10. Embershine says:

              Oh? I thought this was “Never about your review”?

              You’ve said that many times. Either answer his question or mine, or you’re admitting that you did only care about the review.

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            11. There are some who would say your refusal to answer this is tacit admission you hold a very unsettling viewpoint, Sevenways. It is in your best interests to answer.

              Do you think it is okay for adults to bang teenagers, Sevenways?

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            12. N says:

              Oh? I thought this was “Never about your review”?

              It isn’t I just want to make him do it. A win for everyone he forced to take his review. Literally raping out stories for his own amusement.

              You’ve said that many times. Either answer his question or mine, or you’re admitting that you did only care about the review.

              “Answer it god damn it or I will spread more lies about you REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” ~ Embershine 

              How about you apologize for being an asshole and enabling him before I do so?

              What’s that? No? Well someone really has their panties in a bunch.

              You all lie about me all the danm time! I have explained myself no less than twenty times but nope!

              “She’s only doing this because of the review REEEEEEEEEEE! Anyone who disagrees with us is a sockpuppet REEEEEE.” ~ All of you retards.

               

              Honestly, I can say anything and you will still try your damnest to turn it into a lie. Why? Because you’re children. You have egos the size of the sun, no life, and are incapable of giving actual criticism.

              Do you want to know why I don’t stop? Because you nothing you do works against me! My warnings are proven all the danm time by your reviews.

              “But its lies and sander!” ~ Screams The blind idiot Farla.

              Bitch everything about you all did. When it comes to your little sock puppet nonsense you have a lot of fucking holes. Add on sometimes you cry “bully” o the users you already bullied those they, their friends, and even readers turn against you and help me!

              AshxSelene Writer learned the hard way why you can’t make a claim that Farla and St have done, They are becoming a pariah by the mere act of helping you. 

              I am the reason you only get like what? Four replies out of twenty? Oh, right that’s right I’m never blocked by them but you are more likely to be blocked. No amount of crying sockpuppet bullying me matters. Hell people who even believe it are actually praising me (and then get reprimanded for that.) for giving you what you deserve.

              Your a hypocritic. You can’t stand the fact people cal you a troll and a bully. You lie about everything. You even refuse to admit that you’re wrong!

              Here are your answers you pieces of subhuman garbage. Knowing you dumbasses your going to find a way to either twist my words or you know make shit up, cause you can’t actually debate or wrap your head around the fact you might be a bad person.

              Embershine: I don’t answer retards.

              St Elmo’s Fire; Stop making pointless assumptions. Alsostop being a dumbass. If things are not stated people do not assume underage. You might be a pedophile but no one else is.

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            13. N says:
              Five minutes from now.

              “No U!” ~ St/Fara/Talarcwhatever.

              You guys are so predictable it’s boarding on retarded.

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            14. If things are not stated people do not assume underage.

              I see someone has not spent much time in fandom.

              Amazing that you said all that and still didn’t actually answer my question. Do you agree teenagers count as underage?

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            15. Roc says:
              [Amazing that you said all that and still didn’t actually answer my question.]

              I’m personally more amazed she was willing to even say such a long and insulting speech. I cannot fathom how she can call people “subhuman garbage” in good consious. That’s a really mean thing to say, regardless if someone deserves it or not.

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            16. Hyatt says:
              Oh boy, ableist slurs. Great job at winning hearts and minds, troll.
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            17. N says:

              I see someone has not spent much time in fandom.

              St you haven’t spent nor a single god danm second in it. You always complain so much and barely seem aware of what Pokemon even are.

              Amazing that you said all that and still didn’t actually answer my question. Do you agree teenagers count as underage?

              Already did but you are retard and a pedophile so I shouldn’t be surprised you want to keep going on.

              I cannot fathom how she can call people “subhuman garbage” in good consious. 

              I don’t have a good conconius when it comes to them after all the shit  I seen them do and that’s just to others. Then add on what crap they do to me and I am done being nice to you assholes.

              Oh boy, ableist slurs. Great job at winning hearts and minds, troll.

              Oh, a troll would say that. Especially one on a site were they are not being bullied every single day by the assholes in question.

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            18. N says:
              Oh, and if you go “You are not saying” whatever nonsense you are thinking do us all a favor Elmo’s and leave your crazy fetishes out of here.

              You’re a pedophile.

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            19. N says:
              Also, I am waiting for the “I’m sorry” you owe me and a lot of other users. Or are you incapable of humility?

              “I owe nothing!”

              I guess that’s what you’re thinking right now about that?

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            20. Hyatt says:
              Yes, a troll would say that. Because a troll doesn’t care about anyone else and just uses words as a bludgeon to hurt their target. If you really cared about stopping bullying you wouldn’t use language that was invented to bully people.
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            21. Roc says:
              Hybrid claims that she cares about the authors’ feelings, but some of her responses say otherwise.

              https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13139457/

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            22. Embershine says:

              Indeed. See also here, where she tells the author his rewrite is confusing and filled with plot holes because Saint said it was better. And also said not to trust any praise from a previous reviewer?

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            23. You’re a pedophile.

              “No U” ~ Sevenways

              You know, given your known history of having every single thing you accuse us of actually turning out to be a thing you’re doing, I’d be careful about saying this, Sevenways.

              Show me where you answered my question, because I don’t see it. Do you agree teenagers count as underage?

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            24. Raven says:
              Dude, the English language has a plethora of words that mean “stupid”.  Maybe don’t use the one that’s considered a slur.
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            25. Act says:

              Elmo, I know you’ve decided for whatever reason to engage with Blaze, but letting someone post here after repeatedly using ableist slurs is something I’m super uncomfortable with. I already banned her once for this. IMO, that should be it.

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            26. N says:

              You know, given your known history of having every single thing you accuse us of actually turning out to be a thing you’re doing, I’d be careful about saying this, Sevenways.

              Hey, look St Elmo’s Fire wants to make even more shit up about me. Your attempts at Slander not working out for you?

              Show me where you answered my question, because I don’t see it. Do you agree teenagers count as underage?

              BITCH GET YOURE HEAD OUT YOUR ASS OR GO BACK TO SCHOOL BECAUSE YOU ARE A RETARD!

              St Elmo’s Fire; Stop making pointless assumptions. Also stop being a dumbass. If things are not stated people do not assume underage.You might be a pedophile but no one else is.

              “Also stop being a dumbass. ” Was yoour answer to your retarded question. Of course not but you are retarded enough to think that.

              Now apologize for being an asshole.

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            27. N says:
              Act shut up and get out of here.
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            28. SpoonyViking says:

              Ok, I know that even when I was writing for the blog I wasn’t a moderator, but is this really the level of discussion you guys want for Dragon Quill? Something which, at best, is a childish temper tantrum of astonishing proportions?

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            29. Act says:

              I had her completely IP banned and spam filtered at one point, but for reasons I’m not clear on that was reversed. I feel pretty strongly she doesn’t deserve a platform, but I also am not well enough to enforce that right now, so unfortunately all I can do is say I’m pretty unhappy with her being allowed to talk like this and control the discourse here, too.

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            30. Lurker says:
              Lurker here, but thirded. I love the blog, and I’ve been here long before the start of this drama saga. It’s been taking over the content of the blog, and it’s very disappointing. I think Carla mentioned off-site that if you guys don’t give her attention, she hassles other people – I’m off the stance that you let it be their problem; other people are fee to block her from their websites. Or, open up your PMs/a ff.net forum where she can tantrum over there. 

              Hybrid has thoroughly demonstrated what kind if person she is. You have enough content from here to archive and use as proof of get behavior. Why keep subjecting us to the fallout of her narcissistic injuries?

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            31. Embershine says:

              {St Elmo’s Fire; Stop making pointless assumptions. Also stop being a dumbass. If things are not stated people do not assume underage.You might be a pedophile but no one else is.}

              Yeah…I don’t know how to tell you this, Blaze, but you didn’t actually answer the question. He asked if YOU think it’s okay for adults to bang teenagers. Which you have yet to express an opinion on.

              That snippet NEVER address the question. Saying ‘don’t assume it’s underage’ does not equate to ‘I think underage is bad by nature’.

              He didn’t miss it, you’re just awful at getting your point across.

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      2. N says:
        Plus you don’t know how to write or criticize.
        1. Red says:
          Your critical comment is void of substance and use, which is exactly what to avoid when criticising – not just on pieces of fanfiction either. With criticism, it isn’t enough to simply say what’s wrong or what you dislike. There should be advice on how the recipient can improve. Not that I agree with the content of your comment, just saying.
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          1. N says:
            You realize you just talked about St and Farla correct?
            1. Red says:
              You’re the one bringing them into this. My comment didn’t refer to them at all – it was directly towards you. If I didn’t know any better, I’d say you had crushes on them. I’m wounded.
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  2. Hyatt says:

    Hello, you should know who I am and how I’m going to throw my own spew of BC at you:

    …what is BC?

    1. Roc says:
      Judging by what was said after, I think it meant “Bullcrap”.
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      1. Hyatt says:
        If they’re going to abbreviate, why not go with BS? BC just makes me think they typoed.
    2. N says:

      Hello, you should know who I am and how I’m going to throw my own spew of BC at you:

      It’s always fun watching St get yelled at for bad advice.

      1. Do you think it is okay for adults to bang teenagers, Sevenways?

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  3. Farla says:

    Yeah, I was trying to corrolate things. I’ve got them all saved so I’ll just pop that back on.

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