Dragon Quill

Last time, everyone’s sad for some reason despite the wonderful thing that’s happened. Also, evidence mounts that the cure will never be made available for the public. (more…)

Last time, the best thing to ever happen happened. (more…)

Last time on presumably contractually obligated book, there was nonsense, then threats. (more…)

Every time I think I’m ready for this book I find I’m not, that it has found or invented entirely new things to enrage me. (more…)

“ROWAN!” Bee is calling. When I turn in the direction of her voice, I realize how far Rowan and I have walked. I can barely see her standing at the edge of the dead cornfield. “The doctor is here!” she bellows.
In answer Rowan waves to her. “Come on,” he says. “I can’t wait for you to meet him. I can’t wait to show him that you’re alive.”
“Wait,” I say. “Doesn’t it seem strange to you that this doctor knew all about me and he told you that I was dead?”
“If he lied about that, then he must have his reasons,” Rowan says. “I know he can explain.”

The author doesn’t fucking care and I don’t either. It’s skimming time. Let’s do this. (more…)

Last time, the contrivance of the carnival is taken to ridiculous levels.

Now, Jared is driving them to “a compound”. He asks about Maddie and Rhine just says the kid is safe, not that she’s with her grandmother or anything, because why talk to people who aren’t her precious Rapist-chan? (more…)

Last time on Sever, the rapist’s master plan to follow Rhine to her brother is revealed! Rhine still doesn’t know, but Rhine doesn’t know things.

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I AM HAVING a hard time reading your twin because there is something about this person that you won’t admit even to yourself. That’s what the fortune-teller said. Maybe she’d made a lucky guess, or maybe she really did have a gift, because she was right.

Indeed, how much is planned and how much is being made up as we go? (more…)

Last time, Rhine continues to not have any real interest in trying to contact her brother.

Today, Rhine makes excuses for why it’s impossible to connect with anyone anymore. (more…)

Last time, Cecily says she’ll actually do something, making her evil. (more…)

Last time, the rapist is plotting something and manipulating the girls. He may in fact be working together with Evil Mad Scientist.

This time, long chapter is long. (more…)

Last time, Cecily is suffering. Rhine whines. Linden manipulates. (more…)

There’s really no rewrite necessary at this point. Everything makes a horrible, horrible sense. (more…)

Last time, Cecily! Pain! Blood!

I’M SITTING ON the floor of the hospital lobby, waiting. That’s always the worst part, the waiting.

It’s so hard being Rhine.

She’s literally surrounded right now by dying people, by the way. (more…)

Last time on manipulative rapist apologism, men are very important. (more…)