Dragon Quill

There may be nothing else to recommend about this book, but it does have presentation mastered.

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Last time, when Rhine doesn’t respond to Linden’s selfless offer of being locked back up at the mansion with the rapists, he suggests she go live with his uncle instead. Anything to keep her from actually doing something. (more…)

Last time, the girls were terrified to see that instead of Rapist-chan, it was Evil Mad Scientist who’d come to get them. (more…)

Last time on Sever, the book continues to try to push Rapist-chan’s uncle as the greatest ever. (more…)

Last time, Rhine continued to beat herself up about how much she hurt Rapist-chan’s feelings.

Today opens with Rhine discussing again how she’s not hungry. Fascinating topic. (more…)

Last time on manipulative rapist apologism, men are very important. (more…)

Last time, Cecily! Pain! Blood!

I’M SITTING ON the floor of the hospital lobby, waiting. That’s always the worst part, the waiting.

It’s so hard being Rhine.

She’s literally surrounded right now by dying people, by the way. (more…)

There’s really no rewrite necessary at this point. Everything makes a horrible, horrible sense. (more…)

Last time, Cecily is suffering. Rhine whines. Linden manipulates. (more…)

Last time, the rapist is plotting something and manipulating the girls. He may in fact be working together with Evil Mad Scientist.

This time, long chapter is long. (more…)

Last time, Cecily says she’ll actually do something, making her evil. (more…)

Last time, Rhine continues to not have any real interest in trying to contact her brother.

Today, Rhine makes excuses for why it’s impossible to connect with anyone anymore. (more…)

I AM HAVING a hard time reading your twin because there is something about this person that you won’t admit even to yourself. That’s what the fortune-teller said. Maybe she’d made a lucky guess, or maybe she really did have a gift, because she was right.

Indeed, how much is planned and how much is being made up as we go? (more…)

Last time on Sever, the rapist’s master plan to follow Rhine to her brother is revealed! Rhine still doesn’t know, but Rhine doesn’t know things.

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Last time, the contrivance of the carnival is taken to ridiculous levels.

Now, Jared is driving them to “a compound”. He asks about Maddie and Rhine just says the kid is safe, not that she’s with her grandmother or anything, because why talk to people who aren’t her precious Rapist-chan? (more…)