Category: 2. UnWholly

UnWholly Ch52-56, Lev, Nelson, Miracolina, Lev

So, last time I said that the Connor and Risa stories seemed to be separate? I forgot that’s how pretty much everything this book works, and now we’re into a Lev and Miracolina stretch. Either the author doesn’t grasp how to move around between stories or he thinks his audience is too stupid to follow it.

Be aware that separate does not, in this case, mean different. Lev and Cam, Risa and Miracolina…it’s all the same.

We’re on the sixth part, though, which means the end is in sight! (more…)

UnWholly Ch57-63 Connor, Trace, Lev, Starkey, Noah, Starkey, Trace

Well, we’re back to this again. Which means we’re also back to fucking Connor.

“Chatter,” Hayden tells Connor. “All kinds of chatter.”
Hayden paces the tight space in Connor ’s jet, hitting his head on the ceiling more than once.
Connor has rarely seen Hayden this agitated. Until now, he always managed to keep the world at smirking distance.
“Is it just on the Tucson police bands, or the juvey bands too?”
“Everywhere,” Hayden tells him. “Radio, e-mails, every communication we can intercept. The analysis programs have us shooting to red alert.”

Okay, so what’s going on here is they JUST FUCKING REALIZED that Connor2 has been burning down houses while screaming it’s revenge for unwinding plz kill us in retribution for two solid weeks now, and only by accident on the way to noticing that everything’s gone crazy suddenly. This happened only because their analysis programs which run through everything noticed that for them, because they’re that unspeakably incompetent. And yet, we’re supposed to believe they caught Risa’s broadcasts right at the start.

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UnWholly Ch80-84 Miracolina, Hayden, Connor, Nelson, Connor

Having finished with the Goblin King and Trace, it’s time to finish our roundup of characters with names.

We last saw Miracolina get shot with tranquilizer yet again, and Lev asked a kid to help her, and the kid agreed while internally screaming FUCK THIS EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF because this is not a book where people without names get any sympathy.

Miracolina’s head is spinning as she awakes. That’s how she knows she’s been tranq’d. This is the fourth time she’s been tranq’d—she knows the drill by now.

It is ridiculous, isn’t it?

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