Tag: Chosen of the Sun (Exalted)

Chosen of the Sun, Ch5

Last time on you’re here to read about mortals right? Wren walked along, singlehandedly beat up various armed bandits, and exposited about his best bud, Chejop Kejak.

Guess who this chapter’s about!

That seems to be the guiding principal for POV shifts so far. Character A thinks about Character B, then suddenly we’re Character B.

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Chosen of the Sun, Ch2

The Most Learned and Venerable Hai Sholosh took his duties very seriously, which is why Tanak Milam didn’t take him seriously at all. Had Sholosh known this, he probably would have disciplined his acolyte severely, but since he was fundamentally absorbed in his work, it worked out for the best for all concerned

When this is your opening, you know it’s not going to be a good chapter. This is commits the greatest sin of being overly wordy and smug about it.

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