Rather meh today.
Name: Cataclyptic
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1201286/
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Subject: Reply
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7739509/
Well I am very sorry you find it terrible. However as I mentioned in the
introduction, this story was written two years ago. In my defense, I had no
beta readers for this story (still don’t) and I had no idea about the
capitialization rules until recently, because this was all my own doing and I
have never had any help whatsoever, even though I have requested it many
times.
As for the second half, I did not know that so thank you for telling me, I
will impliment it in the latest chapters.
Finaly, how can my characters be ooc when their personalities are my own
creation? It’s fine if you don’t like them but please refrain from false
accusations.
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This is one of the lolegendaries fics. It says so much about their grasp of characterization.
Name: Annihilator Zero
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3164512/
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Subject: re: Your review to Luck
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7741481/
Thanks a lot for the critique. I never was sure exactly how dialogue was
structured grammatically, thank you very much for calling me on it. And yeah,
that makes sense with the capitalisation thing.
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Name: olihmajor
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2783972/
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Subject: reply to your review
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7741772/
Hi, and thanks for the long review! I write like that to include more detail,
and also to enforce what is happening. I’ll start making my sentences simpler
so they’re easier to understand from now on.
This is Ash’s character, and he isn’t exactly perfect. Judging from the show,
he would be the kind of person, even as an adult, to use that kind of logic.
However, Latias can use that argument.
I capitalize things like ‘Pokemon’ and the Pokemon’s names, because that’s how
it’s officially spelled. That’s only a minor reason, though; the main reason
why I do that is because I consider them proper nouns, since they are the
names of species. Similar to how ‘Red-Tail Boa’ is capitalized. It’s a
matter of opinion.
I know that, but I capitalize the word afterwards in cases like that because
the dialogue ends with a question mark or exclamation point, which would
denote the stop of a sentence. Also, I know all of that, but it’s still nice
to have a reminder ^_^
True, you do have a point. I’ll incorporate it as such. The problem is,
though, that otherwise their marriage would have been illegal. I could alter
it somewhat. Anyways, thanks for the long review, and all of the critique.
It really helped me!
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Name: Sky’s Eternity
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/411547/
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Subject: Review Reply!
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7741970/
Hello!
Thank you for being honest about my grammar, I will admit that it is not the
greatest in the world. And I do try to at least proof read my work before
posting them, however, I am thankful that provided constructive criticism. I
wasn’t aware or knew that the chapter was being overwritten, I have read many
Pokemon fics with little to no detail and found myself rather distressed and
irritated with that fact. I felt that going in detail for “Renewed Resolve”
was the right choice of action. But it seems that I may have over thought
that.
As for capitalizing “Pokemon” dealing with the word “pokemon” it
simply didn’t
feel or looked correct with not being capitalized.
Also, thank you for providing verbal examples for dialogue. I appreciate that
very much so. Though, I stumbled upon your profile and saw that you are a Beta
read. Would it be possible to ask you to be one?
Once again, Thank you.
Sincerely,
Sky’s Eternity.
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Name: Aries Diamonds
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1438022/
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Subject: re: Your review to Please let me in
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7741733/
Hi! I just wanted to say, thank you. Thank you for your review. It brought a
lot of things to light for me. I’m sorry about my sentence structure and
grammar. English’s not my first language. It’s hard for me to figure out how
to use past/present/future tense. It’s annoying as well. Chinese doesn’t
really have tense, so it’s hard for me to adjust.
But that’s not the point. The point is, thank you for the review, I know I
need a beta, but most betas either take forever or barely put in any thought.
I usually let someone else look at it for me, but I’m very impatient. I’ll
look over my work a few more times before I post them. Thank you for the
review and thoughts.
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Name: randomninja2398
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2728521/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Academy
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7731038/
I’m really thankful for the advise and I will use it for future use. Though I
read very popular books that switch between 3rd and 1st POV’s (like Maximum
Ride)I know it’s probably since they are famous writers so it’s alright to
slack off a bit but still.
Also, just so we’re clear, you told me off saying that was bad criteria for a
trainer to be accpeted. That is not the criteria. I said LENGTHS not CRITERIA.
They use that type of information so they can understand how to work with
their students better. NOT to accept, I’ll clear that up next chapter
Thank you
Sincerly Randomninja2398
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And you jerks were trying to trick me into reading those books.
Name: Mega T-Rex
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3004770/
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Subject: Apologies
Sorry, I have been so caught up in typing out that i EVEN forgot that! Really
sorry. Thanks for pointing that out for me.
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Name: TomboyIsAwesome
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2704908/
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Subject: Your review from Her Dark Eyes
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7744264/
Sorry for my bad grammar. Your criticism kinda helped me, and thanks for
reviewing anyways! By the way, did you like my story? If not, sorry and you
don’t have to reply to me if you didn’t like it.
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Name: WolfieTheGreat
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2944612/
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Subject: Your review
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7743864/
I would like to thank you for your review. I will do my best to not make the
same mistakes again on my next story. I will not promise however as my
grammar,well quite frankly, sucks.
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