Name: Mystickenji
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2462682/
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Subject: RE: Review.

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7697523/

First off, thanks for the review. I’ll keep these things in mind.

The reason why I capitalize words such as Pikachu is because they’re species
names, which are proper nouns.

The comment about elite has been noted. I couldn’t think of anything better to
use there because ‘member of the Elite Four’ wouldn’t fit there.

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Arg.

Name: Lexcia
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1497873/
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Subject: Angry yet, thankful

I am writing to thank you for taking time to write a review for my fic. First
of all it upset me, but after a while, I realised that I hadn’t been writing
as well as I used to. I used to have a Beta, before she decided that I wasn’t
worth the dirt under her shoes.
I am taking all your advice to heart and I am working very hard on Chapter 3.

~Lexcia

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Name: Maddiepink5
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2610574/
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Subject: Review Reply

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7698465/

Thank you for your feedback- to be honest, it’s the only helpful review I’ve
gotten so far.

-First. I’ve gotten into many discussions about the capitalization of things
like Pokemon. I honestly don’t know what to think, because I’m almost positive
that Pokemon is typically capitalized in that scenario in official literature
and things. However, I’d have to get my hands on some of those kid books
Pokemon makes. However, I just feel entirely more comfortable with this.

-Second, I suppose I could’ve made this more clear. What I meant was, you had
to get special permission to travel the region, not just train Pokemon. In
fact, I’m going back now to make that whole part a little clearer, so thank
you for pointing it out.

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Name: Shadow-Wolf231
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2139597/
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Subject: Response to your review

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7698814/

First of all, Pokemon would still be considered capitalized. I have never EVER
seen it to be lower cased. Even in the mangas ive read. Second, thats how i
meant it to be. Its supposed to like a summary of the theory at the end when
he wakes up, except at his view the entire time. If you dont like it, thats
your problem. You can stop reading it now. ‘kay bye

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Name: clarinet97
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2109974/
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Subject: review

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7699245/

Wow! That’s the best review I’ve ever gotten! And thank you so much or taking
the time to type that all up, it really means a lot to me! But yeah, that all
makes sense, what you said. I’ll keep that all in mind when writing the next
chapter! And now that you say it, I really could’ve started this when Dawn
already is in Hoenn, but many pokemon fics I’ve read always include the part
where the characters leave home, and that’s all described. Thanks again for
the review!

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This illustrates one of the reasons I feel like these review sprees are important. People write based on what they see other writers doing, and that means certain things get repeated that shouldn’t be if no one speaks up.

Name: ColbyDanielle
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2387674/
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Subject: Review

Thanks for pointing those out, I feel bad for missing them in the first place,
I don’t pay as much attention to how something is written unless when I type
and since my Microsoft word failed me it turned out bad.

Yes. I know my grammar and spelling are horrid, I’m not very good in English
and letters just swarm together if I look to long. So I’m glad you pointed out
some stuff I went through I tried fixing a few errors while I could.

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Name: HikariNoTenshi-San
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1730613/
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Subject: Why?

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7699510/

Like, really? Was this necessary? Is it THAT hard to just ignore something?
It’s a fanfic, it doesn’t have to be great. At least my spelling and grammar
isn’t as atrocious as others. I mean, have you seen some of them? If you’re
going to criticize, can’t you at LEAST give reason why you think that way?
MAYBE it’ll help a person not suck as much.

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As I mentioned yesterday, actually the grammar is horrible.

Name: the song of the dead
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2581658/
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Subject: Thank you

Thank you for that review .Would you mind being my beta and I was going to
explain the gible and charmander later in the story .They play a some what
imporant role in the story so dont trash me to hard alright

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Name: Cardcaptornicole
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3146514/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon Mystery dungeon: Team Starlight

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7698034/

Thanks for the constructive critisicm Grammer isn’t my strong point and i’m
still new at this.

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Name: P r i n c e C h a r m e r 0 7
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2535263/
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Subject: re: Your review to A Wedding

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7697635/

Hehe. ^^ I’m still trying to figure the rules out. Thanks for the help! :D :D

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Name: Cat Minikay
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2680648/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Anarchy Brothers

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7699134/

Thank you very much for pointing all of that out. I really appreciate it when
someone tells me what I’m doing wrong rather than leaving me to figure it out
myself.
I noticed the typos after I uploded the fic, which doesn’t do me much good.
I have to be honest, I didn’t see the difference in a few of those dialogue
examples.
Greenette is just a joke I like to keep in my pokemon fics.
As for what I use for scene breaks, I liked the way it looked. But if it’s too
distracting or ugly then I suppose I could try something else.
Thanks again!

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