Dammit I meant for this to post before Pokemon Black.
Anyway, a sad lack of crazy today.
Name: EchoFire9
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2480541/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokémon Technical Institute
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7775876/
[You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t
capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard….]
As far as I know, Pokémon and the names of different species of Pokémon are
always capitalized. If you visit any sort of Pokémon website, that’s the way
it’s written there. I may be in error, but I’m just going by what I’ve seen.
[Dialogue is written as “Hello,” he said or “Hello!” he said…]
I apologize for any grammatical errors I may have made in the dialogue. I
haven’t written very many stories with dialogue in them. I’ll try to pay more
attention to the speech verb thing. However, I’m not apologizing for using
giggled.
[This is stupid…]
Well, thanks for showing you aren’t biased. Maybe the administrator shouldn’t
be a dick, but he is. There are teachers like that in other books, and there
are teachers like that in real life. Also, I like shonen. Pokémon is a shonen
anime, and so is this story.
I thank you for your review, but i could have done without the nit-picking.
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Name: Furret
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3482758/
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Subject: Blargh
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7778785/
I know. C:
I KNOWWWW.
Sorry, I was like out of my head while making it, gonna fix it up alot.
Also, it’s my typing quirk to spell species (For only Pokemon) to cap the
first letter of the species. It’s always been my quirk. Sorry.
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Name: CaptainPiika
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2317544/
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Subject: Reply
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7780577/
I’ve gotten a review from you before that had that same point about
capitalization, and I know it really seems to bug you. All I’m going to say
about that is that it bugs me just as much to see “Pokémon” not capitalized,
however little sense that may make.
Thank you for your input, though. I was having difficulties getting their
conversation to go in a sensible direction, and now that I look at it, the
execution wasn’t great. I’ll keep that in mind for any future oneshots.
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Name: Aprotny
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2798946/
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Subject: Your reviews to father and son
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7779528/
You’re evil.
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Name: DragonSoul388
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3592116/
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Subject: Pokemon Mythology
Hello, I was surprized to get a review like yours. I wanted to thank you for
the tips because I never knew a lot about dialogues (hopefully I spelled that
right). But yes, I am messaging you to thank you. I know that the dialogue
isn’t all you reviewed, but it was most helpful to me.
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Name: Shinzoku
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2063106/
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Subject: Erm…
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7767430/
I assume that you don’t like this in the slightest? I’m sorry if you don’t,
but thanks for the review anyway. There’s a lot of things and excuses I could
put down, but I did happen to miss everything you put down. On the Mewtwo
part, he’s just saying that Arceus wants to get away from humans by turning
them into humans, and it just makes no sense to him.
I’ll keep an eye out for the loose and lose things. I always get confused on
which is which.
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Name: BrendanoHarns
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3629697/
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Subject: re: Your review to Book One Kanto
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7761341/
There’s nothing grammatically wrong in that sentence, so…yeah…just the way
I write. Sorry.
You’re right about the capitalization thing, though.
I try to write things so that they are not too slow, but I just wanted to pack
in a lot of description for something as beautiful as the beach. Not to
mention the fact that I need something to contrast with the high action that
will eventually come.
Thank you for the review!
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Name: Turrin379
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3657769/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Trainer’s Chronicles
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7780759/
Thanks for the feedback, I’ll go fix my grammar! As for the story, I agree
it’s lacking, but I’m trying to get the story to be more important. Thanks for
the help!
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