We continue to lack real insanity. I’m pretty sure that means it’s going to explode in some new and terrible fashion.

Name: White Rose Phantom
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1729440/
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Subject: :]

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7705010/

Thanks for correcting me on the dialogue thing. I’ve always been a bit
confused about that. But for the captilizing, you do capitilize Pokemon names
like Charizard and Pikachu. In handbooks, games, and all that stuff, they’re
capitilized so I’m pretty sure they should be in stories. :]
But! Thanks for taking the time to review :)

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Name: Princess-of-Your-Doom95
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2907308/
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Subject: Your review

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7705839/

I’m sorry if you don’t like it. I have never written a Pokémon fic before, so
it is new to me.
And thanks for the grammatical help.
And no, Melinda is not goth. She is just Melinda, not goth intended.
Again sorry if you don’t like it

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Name: Polaricey123
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3377992/
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Subject: re: Your review to Strength and Weakness

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7704884/

Yeah, I know. I had trouble with that in my last pokemon story, too. I guess
I’m just used to seeing names capitalized in the games. For example, “Ratatta
used Quick Attack!” and the likes. Thanks for the advice with the dashes. I
could never figure out how to end a sentence to state a character’s actions,
then pick it up again, so you’re really helped me out here. Thanks again! :D

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Name: Fabled Wings
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1509250/
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Subject: Review reply

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7706038/

Ah, thanks for correcting me on that. I’ve just seen other authors use the
word ‘drabble’ on most short stories of a few hundred words and never bothered
to check the definition.

As for capitalization, I’ve seen it both ways and there doesn’t seem to be a
set rule on whether Pokemon names should be capitalized or not. I prefer it
this way because it looks better to me and I don’t really treat Pokemon as
animals.

Yeah, I don’t know what happened there either. I’ll go correct it.

Thanks for the review and critique!

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Name: chrissyeatsmonsters
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2758213/
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Subject: Review

You reviewed my pokemon fanfic, and I must say you really laid into me. Never
got constructive critism before. I didn’t try to make it perfect the first
time around since I was aiming just to get my plot out then return and cleam
up my mess. Like I mentioned I am new to this so I will take those notes into
consideration, but now i’m not sure if I will continue it. Untill I patch it
up, it is on a hold.
Thank you for your time, I suppose.

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Name: Hatsodoom
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1870660/
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Subject: …

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7705870/

Read my profile fuckwad.

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Name: ari the fairy
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3570716/
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Subject: re: Your review to Ten ways to get a girl

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7706176/

Thank you for the critique~
Yeah, the prologue wasn’t up to my standards either, but I was lacking a beta
for it, and completely forgot to proofread it myself.
I’ll make the edits you mentioned as soon as i catch a second.
Thanks again,
Ari

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Name: Twilight- The Moon Spirit
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1879396/
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Subject: re: Your review to As Darkness Falls Remake

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7706518/

Lol I seriously thank you for the advice you’re giving me. In fact I noticed
that my other reviewer said that the dialogue was weak and kinda forced as
well so I’m working on how to correctly do the speaking parts of the story
(never really got time to work on it since most people kinda don’t leave
reviews :/)

I know trainers start at ten normally, there is a reason he couldn’t start
till the age of sixteen though I was saving it for chapter two. However I
guess I should have put the reason in this chapter to make it flow better.

Also it is incredibly contrived, a lot of things will be and that’s kinda the
point. That commercial doesn’t look right no matter how much you look at it.
There is a reason for that just like how you said it kinda seems like all
kinds of things are happening before he becomes a trainer. It’s part of the
plot though I guess I could have done it better.

Also of course the adults have skills. Do they magically start sucking the
moment they turn adults? xD (actually based off the normal fanfic they do…)

Next thing, sorry about using the wrong word, I always seem to miss one or two
of them no matter how much I try to look for them.

He knows the basics of battling, though he’s never battled with real pokemon.
That is something I was planning to save for later as well.

Also I’ll look into a beta becasue as you said I’m not catching everything on
my own. But I really do thank you for the comment you gave me because the only
way I’ll ever get better is if someone tells me where I messed up. Thank you
for taking the time to help me out.

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