Authors Part 5

Not as much today, whatever that means.


Name: Blade Starshot
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3363682/
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Subject: Thanks, I guess

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7698905/

Like the subject says, thanks for reviewing. Just to clear up some facts:
I’m not good with grammer, not really an excuse
Ben’s pokemon have no nicknames
I’m still a rookie writer
I am prone to forgetting how to spell certain words, which isn’t an excuse
Finaly, I find it hard to do good english when I have been home schooled for
1.5 years and then thrown into Ireland’s english system.
Anyway, thanks for reviewing. I love most of the feedback I get.

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Name: FruitlessFruit
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3537859/
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Subject: Thank You, Farla(I mean this sincerely)

Well it seems I have had some pretty good luck with people who’ve reviewed me
so far. I would rather have a flame than a one line wonder I’m used to.
Appreciate the review, and in all honesty, I recieved a similar critique from
my sister who read it after I uploaded. I’m probably going to scrap what I
have, and redo this story’s beginning in a different way. But once again,
thanks for reviewing. (I almost enjoy the brutally honest remarks.)

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Name: lethalcarnage
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3349047/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokémon: Kohala Region

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7707800/

1. I add the list of names so I can introduce everyone earlier than later.
2. I repeat stuff on purpose.
3. Those are actually capitalizes because they are names like Stephen or
Chase. It would never be Chase’s typhlosion. Trust me I know this because I
read a Pokémon book and it had Ash’s Pikachu and even when you look up stuff
that has Pokémon they always capitalize the them no matter what.
4. If you ever go to a sports game they do play convenient music for the
sport.
5. I don’t do 80% of other people talking. The anime does more talking from
others than I typed.
6. The battle isn’t setup for a new region, I just wanted my character to use
to championship to not have to worry about it anymore when he goes on
adventures.

P.S. Before you go on troll or whatever its called. Learn your facts. Thanks
bye. =)

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Name: Galadriadhar
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1587243/
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Subject: Review Reply

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7710127/

First off, thanks for the review.

Secondly, thanks for sharing your feedback. I’ve always personally felt that
it’s incorrect to not capitalize the species. For example, you always see
capitalization in the games. As well as that, I have never run across any
article on Bulbapedia where these were not capitalized.

But, this is just my opinion, as I’ve seen multiple stories on here where
these are not capitalized. I would like to know what you thought of the story
itself, if you don’t mind sharing.

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This last bit comes up a lot, understandably. It’s really what people usually want to know. Unfortunately, sometimes the answer is “beyond what I said about the nice dialogue…no real feelings on the subject.”

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