A dabble of crazy this time.
Name: HellionKyou
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/775265/
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Subject: re: Your review to Peach
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7711761/
WOW a flammer thanks. But ya know I didn’t try when i wrote it,it was a dare,
so you can say what ever you desire, bc of freedom of speech. But just to let
you know, peoplewrite bc they love it or joking around, no-one cares about
flammers like you.
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Ah, this is really what it’s about.
The story in question didn’t get crit of the usual type, I just said it was terrible, because a) it was and b) the issues were inarguably an issue of someone thinking they didn’t didn’t have to bother.
They are now angry at me. But they are also perhaps reconsidering the idea that posting shit they didn’t put effort is a winning strategy.
Had I spent my time listing everything they did wrong, they would still be mad at me, but I’d have wasted the time on things they already know. Had I praised it as “so not that there’s anything really bad about this but maybe you’d like to know…” they’d have sent me back “lol yeah i know but it doesn’t matter!” and continued on their merry way.
I prefer the anger and possible reconsidering.
Name: Speedbump1
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2150099/
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Subject: Reply to your review
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7711135/
First, thanks for the criticism.
Second, Perhaps you could beta read in the future for me?
I guess your right about the pokemon names.(Blastoise vs. blastoise, Skarmory
vs. skarmory, Garchomp vs. garchomp)
As for Hephaestus, I wanted a story different from “I stole an eevee from a
guy who lives on the roof top.” I suppose I should think of some sort of
justifying statement like “I had no idea they were so rare.” or “When I
found
out that they were really rare, I began to wonder why he was wild.”
Emanated will be changed to something else, and usually I’m better about
comma-not-period in quotes. The Loud-Load typo was a mistake(now how did that
happen?)
Throw “definitely” out, and I suppose the fanfic gets better.
From, a writer who could use improvement.
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Name: Hotrod198
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2148939/
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Subject: re: Your review to Enter the Apocalypse: Emerald Hard Mode
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7709231/
Thanks for the review and I have a couple of questoins:
1. With the professor saying the MC has potntial, would it have been better i
I said something along the lines of “everyone has the potential to be a
trainer, you just need to find it”
and 2. Would you be interested in Beta Reading for me? You seem to know what
your talking about as well.
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Name: FieryFafar
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3187406/
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Subject: re: Your review to When Two Are One
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7709476/
O…..kay -,-
I don’t know what to say. I…appreciate it that you’re trying to help.
But the dialogue ‘”Hello,” he said.’ is legit. I learned that since I was 9 so
I don’t see the problem.
And yish. The dash thingy, I just realized that months ago. And this fic is
written months ago. I just feel lazy to correct it =w=
Though I am quite thankful that you pointed some things out. Even though it
was kinda ambush-y -,-
Are you a teacher or some sort? Not being sarcastic here. Just curious and I
just read your grammar guide and it helped me understand some things =w=
And about the Pokemon name thingies. I prefer just capitalizing them.
Especially since I don’t nickname my Pokemon. And I find it nicer to
capitalize it. Heh. Own person’s choice.
BUT I do like it that you help me with some things. But next time, try not to
sound so…direct -,-
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Ah, there’s the what is this i don’t even I was missing.
Name: TheWaterPheonix
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3556308/
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Subject: My damn crappy story
i know my story sucks, no need to rub it in…
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Name: Aldraia Dragonsong
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1462328/
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Subject: re: Your reviews of Memory and Look Not Into the Eyes
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7702427/
Dear Farla,
Thank you for reviewing my fanfiction. I truly appreciate your opinions
and understand how you arrived at them. However, I must respectfully disagree
with your assertion that the names of Pokémon (and indeed, the word Pokémon
itself) should not be capitalized. I capitalize the species names of all
Pokémon, and the word Pokémon as well, because that is what is done in the
video games. I keep with the tradition established by those games.
Your compliments regarding Memory are appreciated, and your complaints
regarding Look Not Into the Eyes are noted. I will try to lengthen the
chapters as the fanfic goes on, but the first few are, I regret to say, going
to be rather short. However, I can assure you that the characters will become
better-established as the story goes on.
Sincerely,
Aldraia
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Name: Cenobia100
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2668635/
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Subject: re: Your review to Of Ice,Fire and Thunder
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7713156/
I understood nothing of the hello thing but it was my first romance fic and
Ity’s fanfiction so I can make the legendary’s sound like that if I wanted to.
If you don’t like legendary’s acting like people make your own.
I respect your view though
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Name: psyanic
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2993592/
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Subject: Review
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7713667/
Thanks for actually taking the time to read and review my story! I kind of
consider it policy to respond to every single review… Weird habit I guess.
Anyway, I can pretty much say I can agree on nearly everything you said. A lot
of it was probably unnecessary information now that I take a second look at
it, going on the trainer’s academy crap. Yeah, there’s a lot I can work on.
Hm. Not much else I can say…
Once again, thanks for reviewing and all! I’ll be sure to use your critique
and fix up this prologue and to use for future chapters!
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Name: Yuu Kawashima
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3507556/
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Subject: No Subject
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7713772/
Looks like you’ve come to a misunderstanding.
I know it said not to reply, but I need to tell you something. I’m not making
non-story chapters, I’m simply asking if anyone if they would like they’re own
character that they made up to be submitted in the story. Besides, you don’t
know what would happen anyway, some may fit together and some may not. But i’l
deal with that when the time comes, you don’t know what may happen in the
future. What I do with my stories are my business, and what you do with your
story are you’re business, so you don’t have to tell me anything.
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It’s not that what I’m posting isn’t a story, it’s this particular type of not-a-story! Totally different.
Name: PokemonTrainerAshuki
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3164212/
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Subject: Thanks for the feedback
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7712763/
Yeah, thanks for that. I appreciate the honesty and how do you suggest I make
the battles more interesting? I’ve also made a few more chapters that are more
involved with the plot.
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Name: IcicleHikari
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2497421/
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Subject: re: Your review to Novelshipping How They Met
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/5600062/
Hi Farla, I justwanted to say is this really all you can review about the
story? Sure grammer is one of the important things needed for a good story but
not everyone is perfect. Reviews shouldn’t only be about one thing or else the
author will think thats the only thing he/she will need to fix. As I am typing
this I know I don’t have proper grammer but I’m trying my best. Anyways I
think you should just review the overall average of the story like its plot
and story line too. Also, I checked out your profile. I notice your
very…uh…careful about grammer. I understand how non proper grammer can be
very annoying but take it easy on the person.
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Name: SpecialshippingRocks
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3460194/
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Subject: re: Your review to Goodbye Christmas
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7700658/
…………….weird
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Indeed.