Name: mr.merryberry
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1585378/
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Subject: Thanks for your review

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7719203/

Thank you for the constructive feedback I’ll complete the revisions
ASAP.Errors aside did you at least enjoy the chapter?

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Name: Velkan Council of five
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2965370/
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Subject: NOW SEE HERE!

SOME OF US HAVE BETTER THINGS TO DO THAN LISTEN TO YOUR HALF-ASSED COMMENTS! I
didn’t think I would get this ticked off after Lord Kelvin, But i’m changing
my mind. MIND YOUR OWN FREAKING BUSINESS!

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Name: RossSquirtle
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3432620/
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Subject: re: Your review to Fitting In

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7718683/

I’ll change it to weekend soon!

Okay.

I’ll fix the quote sentence too!

Good point! I need to fix that too!

He’s still got typical stress such as homework etc but I see where you are
coming from.

I’m s;ightly cofused but I’ll try to work on speech!

To let the story progress.

Sorry.

Oops! I’ll change that too.

He is in school, so he can’t really travel round!

Okay, I won’t in future!

Thanks for taking the time to leave a long, detailed review, and for pointing
out my mistakes, it’s very helpful and I appreciate it!

Out of interest, is there anything you did like about the story? :)

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Name: ShadowMasterKizone
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2630193/
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Subject: re: Your review to PMD 2: Cruelity Beyond the Shards

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7718605/

Gee. Since when did a “grammar police” show up? FYI: NOBODY IS FREAKIN’
PERFECT!!! And I can’t find a Beta Reader.

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Name: Koplopermau
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3451919/
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Subject: Review on Life of a pikachu

Hello,

Thanks for reading my story and reviewing. You’re right, my English has to be
worked on. I’ve re-read the entire thing and got some spelling mistakes out
and put some grammar correction on it.

There’s one part in your review I’d disagree with, that’s the pregnancy part.
I could say they mated until they had pichu, but I didn’t want to go describe
sexual stuff just yet. I want to get the story on its way before I do that.

Thanks again and I hope you enjoyed it, despite the spelling mistakes.

Greets,

Koplopermau

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People really need to learn to just not mention it at all if they’re too young to handle it.

Name: Burning Ice Freezing Flame
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2047631/
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Subject: re: Your review to Unova Chronicles

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7720631/

In 5th gen the characters were supposed to be older than the rest, hence why I
made mine older

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In fifth gen there are toddlers running around with pokemon.

Name: reachingforthemoon
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3564281/
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Subject: Review

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7716657/

Whoaaaa…. you’re an awesome checker!

I have to agree with you on the top dialogue and whatnot but the ID part…
it’s true in the real world that they do this but this is POKEMON.
furthermore, it’s a fanfiction. I tend to ignore information from the real
world, unless absolutely necessary.
I’ve been taking a writing course for 3 years, I guess you could call this a
‘laid-back’ work, haha.

-Blue and Green are the only main Pokémon Adventures characters whose names
were changed for the English translation. This is due to the complexity of
Generation I’s game releases, where in Japan, Red Version was paired with
Green Version (leaving Blue as the third), and in the rest of the world Red
was paired with Blue (while there was no Green). This name change is present
in both the VIZ Media and Chuang Yi translations. His game counterpart is also
named Blue in the English translation of Generation II’s games.

They said the names were swapped, right? I have a couple of PA manga in my
room and all of the english names are Green. Doesn’t that mean the original is
Blue?

Thanks for the review!
~reachingforthemoon

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This person is writing complete sentences and yet has the reading comprehension skills normally found in unusually dim earthworms.

Particularly incredible is this is quoting the bulbapedia page, which opens with a disembiuation link about “For the female character from the Pokémon Adventures manga who is known as Blue in Japan, see Green (Adventures).” and then lists then translation of his Japanese name as Green.

Name: Tmae3114
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3593745/
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Subject: re: Your review to A world that’s different

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7718793/

Thanks for pointing out mistakes I’ve made. This is the first time I’ve ever
uploaded one of my stories to http://www.Fanfiction.net so the help is really
appreciated!
I have no idea how I managed to mess up so badly with this story though. I’ll
probaly take it down and upload one of my others, but thanks again for
pointing out the mistakes so that I can improve.

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Name: GothMaureen
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2003055/
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Subject: re: Your review to Fight Against All Odds

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7720395/

Thanks for your review. I’m sorry in advance if I sound incredibly angry and
bitchy.

OK, when you start off by giving me a grammar lesson, I’m not going to be
happy. I have the best grammar out of all my friends, and certainly better
than most of the crap I find on here. (no offense to you, but I’ve never read
anything of yours) Let me just say this- I AM NOT PERFECT. If you want to
correct my grammar, by all means do, just at the start of the review, OK?

It’s a fucking Pokemon! Every game I HAVE ever played, every fanfiction I have
ever read, and even in the TV show and anime, they capitalize the name of the
Pokemon. It don’t know why, but that’s how it’s done in that universe, so it’s
how I’m going to write it, alright? You don’t have to read it if you don’t
like it. And as for professor, that IS a proper noun. I’m a college student,
and all professors I have capitalize that first letter. That I know for a
fact. It’s a title, like Dr. You capitalize it.

May I ask what you see that’s spelled wrong there? I spell check everything at
least twice before posting, and I don’t see anything spelled wrong there. And
do you personally know any Goth people (that is capitalized, by the way!) ? I
do, and so I know all the stereotypes, but some people are like that. And this
is only the first thing I’ve written as her, so if you do choose to keep
reading, you’ll see that this is just the start for her personality. Like I
said, she needs a reason to go to Unova. I needed a way to get her there, and
I really didn’t want to have to deal with making her the Champion for reasons
that I cant divulge to you. That’s between me and my cowriter, sorry.

OK, yeah, you got me there. I used the wrong word. Get over it. I meant
unknown, or something like that.

Thanks. I try. Feedback like this is what I really want. I wasn’t expecting to
get any reviews, considering I usually have to ask, and even then I get
nothing. Whatever. If you’ve read anything else of mine, I tend to write
stories that deal with subcultures repressed by society for one reason or
another, which is why I get into the repression of the OC. And I didn’t mean
for that last bit to sound like it did, I’m sorry. If you do want to
understand what this is setup for, go and read IamRAWRkaythanks’ (my cowriter
and best friend) fic Heroes of Unova:The Race to Save The Reigon. Andy appears
in the latest chapter.

-GothMaureen

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Name: Elliej939
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2892861/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Type Tournament

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7698626/

*Gasp* Awww That was kinda mean, everyone knows that flames make karma cry :(
I mean it was nice that you were trying to help him improve, but generally
people aim more towards constructive criticism rather than just plain
criticism. Maybe in future, you could try to add something you enjoy about the
story to your review too, you know? I’m honestly not trying to offend or tell
you how to live your life, it’s just i know what it’s like to have someone say
something completely negative. It’s discoraging. Thanks for taking the time to
read this message, and i hope you take my advice and don’t hate me for it. :)