Authors Part 9


Name: HokkaidoMaster
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2030623/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon Tamers: Redux

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7720162/

Thought I would comment here… She’s one of my pals. I’m not defending
everything in the review, because you do have lots of valid points. The only
thing I’m really defending is the comment about the stages.

Bulbasaur Ivysaur Venusaur
Child-Stage Adult-Stage Perfect-Stage

That’s the basic system that she and I came up with. I guess she needs to make
that clear. It’s got some complexity in some ways, yet we tried to simplify it
as much as possible (like what happens when a pokemon can only evolve once,
and how it’s classified.) Anyways, thanks for reviewing on her fic. :)

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Because clearly, if I say that calling them adults don’t work, it’s just that I don’t understand that they’re being called adults.

Name: ShadowMasterKizone
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2630193/
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And nobody gives a shoot about a thread. I don’t need a beta reader. I’m
perfectly fine with my grammar. And if you don’t like it, then murder
someone’s story and leave my SHIT ALONE!!! Good day to you sir.

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Name: Zero.Clue
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1353207/
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Subject: Re: Review on God Complex

Thank you for reviewing! From what I have seen, you’ve acquired an impressive
reputation through your reviews (and stories). I usually don’t get a lot of
reviews that actually critique my work, so I’m grateful you did just that.

I admit, there are a lot of rules I am still not aware of concerning grammar
and general use of the English language. The rule about speech tags was new
for me. And while it’s an obvious rule that only proper nouns should be
capitalized, it’s also obvious that I didn’t follow that rule correctly. I
guess I’m just used to writing like this in pokemon fics. I know that doesn’t
excuse my mistakes though. I should read up on grammar again, huh?

(On a side note, I laughed when I saw your other reviews. It’s amusing how
many times you’ve copy-pasted the same paragraphs about capitalization and
dialogue over and over.)

About the fic itself, well…

I’ll admit, it’s not one of my best works. And the fact that I spent ten
minutes to fool around with it isn’t enough to excuse the scattered POVs and
disconnection of ideas. I did say it was nonsensical, but… meh. It was
really written on a whim for fun, and I am sure I won’t go back to editing it
to make it prettier.

Is that a bad writing habit you see? I guess so. I like allowing myself a bit
more leeway since I’m not really a serious writer by nature. To each his
own… I suppose. I still have many ways to go to improve my writing.

I’m aware that you might not reply. That’s okay though. Again, thank you for
reviewing. It has been a pleasure to have received one of your reviews.

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Name: shadikal4ever
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1543697/
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Subject: re: Your review to Raised On Magma & Water

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7720682/

Pokemon automatically gets capitalized by my Word program. This story was just
for fun, so, it doesn’t matter if Maxie and Archie would actually adopt a
kid….

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Name: Bhel-Elryss
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1791330/
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Subject: Review Reply

Okay, FF is being derpy, so I have to PM you to reply to your review.

I really appreciated your criticisms, and am going to put them to work. I’ve
pulled Darkening Dreams down for construction, but when I put it back up I
hope you take another look at it.

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Name: I’ll Cover Angel and Collins
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/640248/
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Subject: re: Your review to Captured

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7724069/

You have commented on every single story I wrote and said the same thing every
time. You seem to like to pick on the small stuff instead of paying attention
to the good things.

Have you ever heard of constructive feedback? Do you even know how to review
on anything in a positive manner? I don’t care if you review but say something
else! I think you just like leaving bad reviews for that stupid blog of yours!

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I class this as the dumbest complaint I get. If I point out the same problem to you on several stories, fix the damn problem.

Name: Rusted Kaibutsu
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3446786/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Chess Games: Acts of War

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7722304/

Thanks for your input.

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Name: LeafxYellow4ever
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3588927/
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Subject: Question

Hey Farla, This is Yellow. I was just wondering what you thought of my
books/ chapters. You seem to be honest and I want to be a author when I
grow up…. It would mean alot if you would tell me what you think.

Thanks,

-Yellow

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Name: Fenrir Connell
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3259217/
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Subject: re: Your review to A Hero’s Fate

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7724211/

Well, thank you, I guess…

First of all, Thank you Farla for taking your time to read my fic until the
end (I’m just assuming you did) And even better, to give me a review with
advice.

Even thought it seems more like something you just copied and pasted to me,
but anyway, I had to give it a lot of thought until I got to your point with
that review.

Yet, according to ALL the books I’ve read, the format for talking (Dialogue)
is different from what you exposed here, is not what I’m doing, tough.

Well, I don’t have a lot of comments about your review…

Thanks.

– Fenrir

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3 Comments

  1. Fenrir Connell says:

    Ok, so you actually DO repost your PM’s… How comes you never answered? You were just too busy copying all this stuff together?
    I see no real point to it, anyway, if you want to do so, you feel free to.

    However… You may be aware that some people may not like this, at all.
    Luckily, I’ve got nothing to hide.

    – Fenrir

    1. Farla says:

      That’s why I say I repost the PMs.
      Because there generally is no point in responding.
      No, I was busy reviewing.
      Other people are free not to send PMs if they don’t like it.

      1. Fenrir Connell says:

        Ok, Ok.
        Just in case my reply seemed mean, that was not the intention.

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