Dragon Quill

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8918844/

Oh yeah, well, I sent you a message earlier countering your arguments. not only that but I also reported you. As you should know, english is NOT my first language.

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8918844/

Ok, I don’t regret what I did, but still, I find your advice useful. But nonetheless, I’m still going to continue with the storyline, you can talk to me about Gramer all you want but I won’t even care. One because English ain’t my first language and to, we’ll, a few Gramer errors won’t stop anyone unless they’re complete idiots.

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8918844/

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A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8915734/

Thanks for the review and the constructive criticism. This was one of my first stories and it was very experimental, so I didn’t expect it to be good. I was actually trying to make the sigilyph not convey any emotion, to express the fact that it has been going on its patrol for quite awhile. I guess it didn’t really transfer from brain to text as well as I wanted. Your review is very appreciated and hopefully, will help me in my future writing.

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8908085/

Thank you; I’ve made sure to double check those errors and I think I have them down. For now, at least. But so you know, I never would have considered capitalizing trainer or professor.

There are known constellations. He even knows a few; he just prefers to make his own.

I appreciate the feedback! He does seem fairly nice; though you’ve only seen him with his closest friend. He might act differently around people… And yes, snorunts are unusual. I’m fond of them though, as well as glalie being one of my favorite pokemon, so he fits in nicely.

M’kay dude, so about your review…
First off, thanks for taking the time to critique my story~ Means a lot!
‘Kay, so about the semicolon thing… Well, I wrote the whole thing on my IPod, and when I transferred it, there where a LOT of stupid mistakes, and the thing for some reason thought that the semi colon was correct, and since I was bored of going through this, I just took it’s word for it.
I’m not exusing myself for it, as an author I should always pay attention to these things. I do plan on going back and fixing it.
Odviously? Yeah. I’m just stupid.
And, if for some odd reason you decide to review the other chapter, where I start using Pokemon, you’re problanl I going to say I don’t capitalize “Togekiss” or “Lugia”, because like animals, it is not something you should do that to, like “dog” or “cat”. And for the most part, you’d be right. However, in the games the names are always capitalized. Going by the early canon, we should’ve wrote it as “RAYQUAZA”. However, in Black and White, the names were set as a lower case, with the exception of the first one, so that is how it is.
Also, when capturing a Pokemon, or in the anime, it’s name will always be its species name, implying that the Pokemon responds to that title, thus making it it’s name and should be capitalized.
Well, that’s all. Thanks for reviewing, your advice will definitely prove helpful!

I appreiciate the input! Oh, and he did bring a weapon. Ill explain later that he is blood-thirsty and loves to kill his target in creative ways.

Sorry, bout that, I will improve in the future.

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8918367/

Thank you for that. I am an advanced grammar student but have not reached that level. Also, please send what you think of the story plot.

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8918367/

Also, I highly disagree with plenty of your stuff.