In which some people are sane and others think wrong is a style.
| ThatOneDwarf | re: Your review to Spark of a Soul |
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I use Ash for my stories for a few reasons. He can be paired with literally anyone, Misty, May, Dawn, he can be shipped with who ever. That’s Fanficion. He’s been on the run, accused for murder (Even though, yes, I know it is far fetched), robbery, B+E’s. So how would he take care of a Pokemon if he can’t even care for himself. That’s Domino’s role in a way, she’s going to be teaching him. Not just about being a thief. |
| AngelHeartObsession | Review for Unbreakable. |
 A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8880366/
I know that it isn’t much of a story, but I had writers block while writing this. |
| Orangen | re: Your review to Darkened Skies: Side Stories |
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The name-capitalizing is something that’s always confused me, as the games cap all the Pokémon’s names, even the wild ones… That is a good point you bring up, though. Thank you! |
Name: CobaltCorsair
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4325624/
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Subject: This.
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8881176/
Why are you criticizing the emotional severity? If you didn’t like it, why
bring it up?
Secondly, I know my grammar. I’m not stupid. There is a particular sort of
style I shot for. A lot of your review was tl;dr.
If you had a problem, you should’ve PM’d me instead. I forgot to write that.
What was the point in this review?
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| beccalovesbumblebee | reply |
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Ok thank you for the review first of all. I know I need to work on this fic. The whole pokemon thing is because the spells check I used edited it for me and I honestly. I am aware parents don’t let five year olds disappear for long hours of time but the girl was supposed to be and school and her mom doesn’t pay attention. I know my pnctuation isn’t good I am going to work on it I promise that |
| beccalovesbumblebee | also |
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Before you say something about how the last message I sent had bad spelling and grammar I just want to say I’m sorry I was typing on my phone and it tends to be stupid |
| LxiaNi | Reply desu? |
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Um… wow. ;o Hmm.. Is this with the musketeer Pokemon? I’ve also heard that advice from a similar friend as well, and I don’t know if I used it right this time since well, I was thinking of Cobalion, Terrakion, and Virizion as their names, not species and all. //Still could be wrong though. Numbers with letters.. Yes… I’m sorry for that! Ok, maybe a question.. But does every number in stories have to be letters and all? The punctuation paragraph is so long and so educational. ;o I’ll remember that. c: //This is what I get for just typing that story. That’s actually a better idea.. I guess I’ve been too stuck with the ones I read on the myth that the trio saved keldeo (Keldeo?) from the fire that I.. yeah. I’ll edit that part then, since I knew the ending was just stupid. Hehe.. As much as I’ll probably think you won’t reply anyway, thank you. c: |
| Lolipop-kun | Hey =D |
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But what I gather that I didn’t understand before, “pokemon”, “pikachu”, ect. Not capitalized unless it is the actual name? That works for me. |
| Rai the raichu | re: Your review to The Journal of Akasuki Rose |
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I know, i’m a sucky writer… sure go on and blame me, but i was just writing something that came to mind. You know there are some people like that, if you don’t really get it then i’m sorry |
| YoshiEmblem | re: Your review to Kyurem’s Capture |
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Wow. I guess I do need to fix things in the future. But you have to remember that this is my first fanfic. Also, I have heard about you before, and am delighted to have you review my fanfiction! I wrote it in the way I thought best, so I’m sorry if it didn’t fit your standards. But I have been thinking about this fanfiction before, whenever it’s nighttime, because that’s my best free time. I think about it better in bed. I feel that it helps me to imagine it, maybe you could try it. In the future, I shall check my grammar once more. I capitalize vaporeon because it’s somewhat of a partner. Even though I disagree with some of your statements, I would love to have you review my further chapters. Although, due to you seeming to review a lot of fanfictions thoroughly, I can’t be positive you will. I also forgot to mention that I’m aware my fanfictions can be cliche, (I apologize for not having the accent over the “e”, this is a PC) but I’m still getting used to some things. That is all for now. |
PSA!
[I apologize for not having the accent over the “e”, this is a PC]
I, too, have a PC! Here is how I put the é in pokémon.
Open Word.
Choose File>Options>Proofing>AutoCorrect Options.
Or just keysmash, right-click, AutoCorrect>AutoCorrect Options.
In the ‘Replace’ box type pokemon. In the ‘With’ box type pokémon. Click ‘OK’.
There! Now you never have to fool around with alt keys to put in the pesky accent mark ever again!Although I’m still not sure what having a PC has to do with it.
On a PC? All you have to do is press SHIFT + CTRL and the “/” key becomes “é” anyway, simple.
What operating system are you using? I just tried that on two Windows 7 PCs and it didn’t work.
CTRL+ ‘ then e does work, however.
“I use Ash in my stories for a few reasons. [describes the advantages of using OCs]”
It’s a shame fandom has such a thing against OCs. The same thing happens in the Harry Potter fandom, people mutilating Harry’s character because otherwise they’d have to gasp shock horror write an OC.
What’s boggling me is that fandom, this fandom at least, really doesn’t have anything against OCs. You’re as likely to see people complaining about CCs.
It seems somewhat calmer than normal, I suppose. Lolipop-kun’s reaction was pretty chilled out. :D
Speaking of Pokemon, what do you think of the new generation, and the X and Y games? The graphics look great and the fire-type starter looks pretty neat (and the legendaries) but it’s a shame it’s only on the 3DS. Not to mention that there’s probably going be about 800 different pokemon in the pokedex now. :O
The protagonist’s huge head really bothered me in the trailer, but I liked the pokemon designs too, particularly the fire starter. I wouldn’t have minded more Gen V games or remakes, as long as they weren’t like the trainwreck of BW2’s plot, but I can understand them being eager to switch over to obligate use of the newest system. I may actually get around to buying a 3DS in the next year. Huh, now that I think about it, new Pokemon gen has been the reason for every new handheld gaming system I have ever bought, from the original Gameboy on.
I thought the protagonist looked a bit strange too. :P And that’s pretty cool! I always wonder if they’ll ever remake R/S. And I wonder if, after X/Y, if they’ll stick to making 3DS games, or continue making games for the regular DS systems too.
I just can’t believe it’s literally X and Y. Otherwise, I’m going to just ignore it until it actually comes out. More fun that way.
The fennec fox fire-type starter is the most precious thing I have seen in a long time, and if, as speculated, it is also part psychic type, it is basically my twelve-year-old self’s dream Pokémon. I’m also intrigued by the grass type, though, since you don’t see many mammalian grass types. Also, the X-legendary reminds me of the forest spirit from Princess Mononoke, which is a great way to make me sentimental.
The X-legendary reminds me of a mix between Virizion and Kingra for some reason. And that’s a good pint about the grass- types. I think the Y-legendary looks pretty awesome, too. :D
I was thinking that too! Forest spirit, take back your head!