“If your grammar is so great then why are your stories full of flames.”
Even though it sounded mean, your review was correct. By the way, I wrote this to end a series. I’ve been trying to end it for a while now and this is the only way I knew how. It’s been running for eight stories now. And I’m still learning fanfic word definitions.
Overall, great review. You knew exactly what was wrong and it is going to help me improve. Thank you again!
Sincerely,
-Nr 755
P.S. I don’t know anything about science really. I took what I knew and tried to write it as convincing as possible. Sorry about the miscalculations and stuff.
The Farla HaterHey you bitch! Don’t you know how ugly you are? Oh…sorry, you don’t because you think of yourself as miss high and mighty. You’re nothing but a stupid narcissistic and egotistic slut. If your grammar is so great then why are your stories full of flames. Just hang yourself you attention-whore.
This is starting to seem more like performance art than anything.
It does brush up against a question I’ve been pondering – does my gender impact only which slur used, or the level of vitriol?
The only real way to test this would be for someone to set up a male account and try reviewing in June or something.
(They also wrote me a fic!)
Leafstrike
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6355409/
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Subject: Please read below.
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10963242/
I appreciate your editing, but we do not mind. Have you seen some of the best stories?
They have editing mistakes too. I can write as much as I want, I can edit what I want,
but you are not an editor. I don’t mind if I have any mistakes. The best stories I’ve
read on FanFiction have a million punctuation, grammar, and spelling mistakes. These are
hand written and hand typed by random people. These will not be published to the world.
If you do not like it that there are mistakes, don’t read this. Go read something else if
you do not like my edits. No one is perfect.
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Since you really seem to know a lot about all this grammar stuff I have a question.
When Shadow says “We could take her with us?” Shadow said. Should it be asked, or said? I know it’s a statement, but he’s saying it as a question so should it be asked or does it not really matter?
MerlockVonBaronA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10962683/
hey i am working on it that was just a prologue the main story hasnt started yet
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 Guest chapter 17 . 6h ago
i wish i could rip your penis out of your body and send it to holl
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| Guest chapter 17 . Jan 11
how long until somebody goes apeshit and rapes farla’s body parts and shoves down the fact that pokemon and real life animals are not the same? cutting off farla big dick with an axe would help alot more
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| Guest chapter 2 . 6h ago
defending farla won’t help it’ll just make you look bad. have a reputation buddy
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| Guest chapter 2 . 6h ago
idiot have you done licking farla’s ass?
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Holl? What is that even trying to say?
A famous penis collector from Iceland. Sadly, it’s a dying hobby.
“This is starting to seem more like performance art than anything.”
So, we can pin a name (such as it is) on that anonymous reviewer?
And damn, that’s just sad. How desperate that person can be to get a kismesis?
My goodness…is it just me or are people particularly nasty this year? The Farla Hater? Really?
If you ask me, people are being far too nice and kind about practically being shut down by Farla, which again goes back to her question about her gender being the issue.
Yeah, no.
It was mostly in reference to your “Hey! Thanks for reviewing my story bla bla bla I’m such a total illiterate dolt thanks for the advice! :D” PMs.
The threats don’t fall under that umbrella simply because they’re trolls with too much time on their hands.
Ahem. Yeah, no. Correcting people is not shutting them down. Telling them to get of the internet for it would be.
Because threats are nice and kind.
TIL “Dialog is written…” = CRUEL SHUTDOWN!!!!
These will not be published to the world.
I’m…not even sure what to say to that.
What’s the matter?
As you know, FFN is a collection of private blogs that Farla maliciously hacked to poke fun at people.
I think what gets me the most about that argument is that, if anything, fanfics have greater exposure than published books. Searching for published books takes effort (and money, if you’re a Act and refuse to read pdfs), but anyone can hop on FFN and skim the latest fanfic offerings. The only thing really protecting them is if there are simply so many that people get bored or exhausted before they get to yours.
Yo, I’d be willing to dummy up an account and male-review later this year.