Mix of reasonable to insane.

Name: chalala-chan
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2459223/
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Subject: Thank you so much!

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7723818/

I really appreciate you helping me with my grammer. Although I wanted to cry
when I read this, it was very helpful and I waas able to use it to fix all my
mistakes. I will update this weekend to the improved version. There was quite
a bit of trouble trying to publish the chapter, seeing as I didn’t have word
on my laptop. I had to try to email it to myself and then get on a different
computer to transfer it, point is I was getting annoyed and just wanted to
publish it at that point. As I was spell/grammer checking my sister started to
get impatient and wanted on, so I rushed the process and didn’t do it
properly. I realize my mistake, and I should only publish work that I have
fully gone over.

I was looking directly at the dialogue from the game and it clearly stated
“ok”, not the four letter work okay. I’m sorry, I find this to be one of those
situations where it doesn’t matter too much. Sorry if it’s a pet peeve of
yours. And as for your statement to [the Zubat], I had fully intended for it
to be a name. But, to follow your excellent advise, I changed all pokemon
names that had “the” before it to lowercase and kept it uppercase when used as
a name.

I’m sorry you don’t find my story interesting. I am going to have new plot
twist in the future, but I wanted to keep the first couple of chapters
relatively the same. I really do appreciate this review, I just wish you
weren’t so brutal about it :) Maybe it was because it was my first review and
I was really excited, but I felt so disappointed when I read it. But I guess I
need to be criticized if I deserve it (And I really do! Gosh, I’m embarrassed
by my grammer.) Most people would just say ‘Good job! Keep it up!’ but you
were nice enough to point out how to improve myself, so thanks again.

I hope one day you might have something good to say about me, but until then
I’ll keep trying my best! Thank you so much for your help, I will forever keep
your review to reference.

Chalala

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Name: MoxieKrow
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3600900/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Final Guardian

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7727986/

Thank you for your review. I have looked into the mistakes you have pointed
out and corrected those that I felt were incorrect. I will work on my grammar
and add in more descriptions in the future.

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Name: Kiwipufferfish
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3181824/
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Subject: Review Reply

I thought you might like to know, I pulled my capitalization from Wikipedia,
Bulbapedia, and the actual Pokémon games themselves. So make sure you send a
message to Game Freak telling them that they’re doing their capitalization all
wrong. Until they change the way they use capitalization in their games, I
will not be changing the way I do mine.
I don’t see why stated shouldn’t be a speech tag either, Webster uses it as
one. If you don’t believe me simply look it up online.
I would appreciate if you would at least see if your advice is correct before
forcing it on me. Thank you anyway, but as I don’t particularly think you are
an excellent source of the English language as you got all this wrong, I will
continue to write as I have been.

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Name: Dark waffles
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/
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Subject: re: Your review to When the grass types were greener

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7729121/

I’m sorry i was at my cousins house when i posted this.
I promise that in the future i will be sure to post them at home.

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Name: SexLoveMagic
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3315013/
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Subject: reply to your review of “Miracle Worker”

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7729672/

Care to actually comment on the story itself instead of my high school level
grammar? I’m a sophomore in high school, not an adult who’s graduated college.
I apoligize for small, insignifigant, yet life-threatening, mistakes.

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I remember back when it was only preteens who would say this.

God I hate life.

Story: Taikyoku
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Bister Brown ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3607362/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141725992
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read this quickly and it’s very cliche and a bit predictable:) also, from the
review you gave me you said you don’t like added detail in stories, but detail
is one of the best things about some of the most well-known and famous authors
suchas J.K Rowling, Charles Dickens and John Steinbeck. I think it is very
naive and strange of you to not think detail is good :) writing is about
painting a picture, not just about dialogue, like in your stories. Your story
doesn’t paint a picture at all, it may aswell be a film/play script. So i’m
going to keep up my detail, because i think it is something you lack:)
evening:) Bister3x
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Name: AwsomenessDude4
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3120936/
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Subject: Pokemon Black and white: Marvin’s Journey

Ok thanks for the advice I’ll edit it and tell me what you think

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