Authors Part 12

In which I gain a spat of reviews.

Name: Carter Stars
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3608149/
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Subject: Your Review~:)

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7729537/

I’d like to start out by saying I truly appreciate your criticism, but your
review has some flaws of its own. I actually don’t understand your entire
first paragraph, since I don’t see anything I did to fit your aforementioned
examples.

If you can show me exactly where I did that though, I’ll understand what you
meant. Thank you and I apologize for pointing that out.

As for your second paragraph, I have to say, sorry, but it is entirely wrong.

“”You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t
capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard.””

You would not capitalize mouse or dragon, I agree, but words like “PokÃ©mon”,
“Charizard”, and “Pikachu”, are Proper Nouns, since Pikachu and
Charizard are
names for a species of PokÃ©mon, and PokÃ©mon is the name of television
series, making them all capitalized, since proper nouns get capitalized, in
case you didn’t know.

Lastly, yeah, it is bland, it’s a start. I wanted to start writing for the
first time, make sure I wasn’t heading south to the north pole, but there will
be more to come. Seeing as in the conclusion of the story showed a boy running
away, I mean, I guess you don’t appreciate cliffhangers, as subtle as they may
be, but it does give me an option to make a continuation.

Thanks for your opinion!

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Clearly the problem with finding a story boring is that I hate cliffhangers.

Name: Rika24
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/526437/
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Subject: pokemon story review reply

thanks for the review, and i deleted the story. i didn’t really care much for
what i was writing in the first place (it was a nuzlocke challenge to replay
LeafGreen, i was just trying to give it a digimon/monster rancher style
twist).

just curious, do you know what a nuzlocke run is?

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Name: evilgreenmunkii
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1173150/
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Subject: re:

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7733238/

Well thanks for the advice. If I was to look for a beta you’d be off that
list.

Thing is it’s kinda my fanfic so I can bend things to my will so to speak.
I mean this world isn’t america and even in the show rich families did things
a certain way. I remember James living in a rich family and being engaged and
ran away.

I’m making my character at a legal age because I’d rather not be a creep and
have some 10 year old kissing someone… I mean come on…

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Name: cheekylips
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/906656/
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Subject: Reply

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7732374/

Just wanted to say thanks for the advice.
I’ll remember it next time I write :)

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Name: Fifth-Of-Fourth
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1266766/
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Subject: re: Your review to Brotherly Affections

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7730823/

Okay, firstly:

I had read something somewhat similar before and I do think it’s more
confusing if there was two Reds, two Redos and one Red with one Reddo so I
decided to go along with Akai after much thought. I will also gladly welcome
any suggestions provided to make it an easier read.

Secondly:

Okay, I do admit that I’m a little confused often while writing when it comes
to whether to capitalizes pokemon or names of pokemon often so I wanted to say
thank you for helping me clear that up.

Another thing I will admit I’m particularly bad at coming to terms with is
punctuations in a dialogue. But since you had already pointed it out to me in
your review, I’ll trust it and make the correction as soon as possible. So I
will thank you once again for that.

To wrap it up, thanks for reviewing my story and giving out pointers to
improve my grammar. I had always been shaky with it especially with the points
mentioned. I will soon edit the chapters as per your suggestion.

As for the last sentence of your review, I can only say: To each his own.

Thank you for taking your time to review my story. Best wishes. :)

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Name: Weavileleader
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3464322/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon HeartGold Nuzlocke

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7730342/

if you didn’t realise, I did that, I skipped the whole ‘Are you a boy? or are
you a girl?’ thing -_- this is the plot

Sorry, but that’s how Nintendo does it, and that’s how I do it. None of your
business.

In some people’s Nuzlockes, they can talk to Pokemon, and so can people,
occasionally. That’s just how it is; again, it’s the way I do things.

They didn’t talk, that’s it. Maybe they didn’t want to…or maybe she can
only talk to Pokemon who are either in her care or just trust her. Never
thought of that, did you?

That’s where you haven’t realised you’re wrong. Things ARE written as
“Hello,” he grinned; it’s the exact same as “Hello,” he said, just a
different
verb. Live with it.

Is all you do correcting people on http://www.fanfiction.net? And have you
ever even PLAYED Pokemon? Coz if you haven’t, you have no right to saying
that it’s ‘pokemon’, not ‘Pokemon’, coz it actually is, so live with it. You
have no right to go correcting me when YOU’RE wrong, and you don’t seem to
have a very extensive imagination, or you would have thought of the fact that
she couldn’t talk to the Pokemon coz 1) they didn’t trust her or 2) they
weren’t under her care.

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Name: Weavileleader
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3464322/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon HeartGold Nuzlocke

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7730342/

oh, and just FYI, I’m not a 2-year-old -_-

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It’s good they clarified that.

Name: Michaelc1112
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3050550/
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Subject: review for soul link chronicles

Thanks for the constructive criticism, it really got me thinking about editing
the the to make the grammar correct and placing information in better spots.
Also I did forget to proofread it, kinda of a stupid thing to do am I right?

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Name: Dark waffles
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/
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Subject: re: Your review to Spin the Barry?

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7731451/

Erm i’m sorry but i already have your remark on my other story there is no
need for you to be as rude as this since i was using office word when i posted
this so there is no need to be as pointless as this, mayb e i should spam you
and see how much you like it?

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Story: You
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141772390
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This is terrible. look up basic grammer before you post.
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I want to frame this. Just look at it. It’s so beautiful.

Story: Lucki
Chapter: 1. this

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141772441
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I don’t get it you yell at me for having errors and spam me all day, yet your
own work has like twenty of them lol
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Story: Fed
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141772473
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This story sucks more dick than Barney does on a good night.
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Story: I Was
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141772503
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Boo
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Story: Who are you?
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141772545
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I agree with Shh this is terrible look up basic grammer before you post! lol
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Review count boost! My favorite little bonus of these things.

Name: Sweetandsourpal
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2147635/
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Subject: Your comment on my story

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7732309/

Thank you for telling me about my mistakes in my writing. I will fix this the
next chance I get.

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Topic: Question and Answer Thread
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http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/11834/25062228/2/#56086965

Reply:
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Poster: evilgreenmunkii

The only helpful thing you said about my Pokemon story was the paragraphs and
such.

Other than that the rest of the stuff you went on about was totally stupid and
pointless. Please do look into the subject and see that it’s real and still
happens. Oh and thanks for not posting your cookie cutter review either…
That thing is horrible and a reviewer you shouldn’t get so lazy like that.
Looks bad

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Topic: Five Things You Should Know About Farla
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http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/11834/21184274/2/#56087214

Reply:
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Poster: evilgreenmunkii

I think some people who review tend to take it a little to seriously. Farla
and other reviewers like her remind me of my ex who would give advice, some
good and some bad. But in the end advice is just that. It is up to the person
to take that advice or not. Farla’s copy and pasting style of review seems
pretty much like a robot and unfortunately why would someone follow a review
that was seen on someone else’s work. In the end it just looks like spam and
like the person isn’t actually giving a real review.

Farla needs to lighten up on the reviewing though. Go ahead and comment on
grammar and such but leave some of the other stuff alone. Like how the
character is supposed to act or their lifestyle.

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Story: Last Straw
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141776975
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This is terrible, look up basic garmmer before you post.

And please stop spamming me, i get it you don’t ship Ash with Gary don’t read.
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Story: DÃ¤mmerung
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141777110
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I read this storya and it’s terrible why don’t you just delete yourself? After
all nobody likes you or your stories.

Think about it we are all on fanfiction enjoying each others stories together
we don’t need bullies like you on here.

You are waste of time and the sad thing is you really think that you are
something Ha grow up.
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Story: DÃ¤mmerung
Chapter: 2. Chapter 2

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141777154
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I read this storya and it’s terrible why don’t you just delete yourself? After
all nobody likes you or your stories stop fameing people bully!
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Story: Butterfly Wings
Chapter: 1. The Second Day

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141777434
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Stop flaiming my stories you idiot nobody gives a damn and everybody hates
you, I mean i had one spelling error, ONE and i changed it not to mention it
said it was yaoi and if you are going to be a homophobe go some where else.

Oh and by the way you made my little sister cancel her profile and stories,
she was crying all day, so please stop being a complete bully and if you can’t
leave, i don’t know if you doing this to get people to hate you or if you are
just a dumb troll but your stories suck.

Why don’t you just delete yourself?
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Story: Unoriginality 4: The Little Thinks
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141777506
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terrible your spelling writing and everything else suck
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Story: Mew’s Trainer
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141777556
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Why don’t you just delete yourself? cunt
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Story: The Fight
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141777597
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Why don’t you just delete yourself?
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Story: Tribulations, Left Alone Book 2
Chapter: 1. Jerusalem

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141777708
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