A lovely hatecrop today.

Name: MikeTheRandomDude
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2430041/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Fools Royal Quest

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7732608/

Thanks for the constructive criticism, but tone it down a little :) Pokemon
don’t have to act like savages, they can act in a manner similar to humans if
they want to. Pokemon can have intelligence and moral standards. Besides, this
story is loosely based off of the game The Elder Scrolls: Oblivion, that is
why they are acting similar to humans. Have a nice day :D

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People really don’t seem to get what criticism means, on a very fundamental level.

Name: XBrokenSanityX
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3596210/
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Subject: You Know, Stuff

First off I would like to say thank you for your review (no I’m not being
sarcastic), your points were very honest and accurate. I took all of your
advice in to thought and hopefully it will be shown in action with some of my
new stories.

Now on the other hand I would just like to say that my story really wasn’t
supposed to have a point/plot and was just a little snippet from a bigger
story. Also if you happen to comment again would you also say what you liked
(if there’s anything) so I have a better scope of what needs to be changed and
what I am doing well.

Again, thank you sincerely.

XBrokenSanityX

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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141788275
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I bet you think your pretty awsome don’t you?

Going on random fictions, not even looking at them before trolling them.

You think your so cool don’t you? You think writing fanfictions and flaming
them without even reading them is fun?

You hurt people, people hate you, i am one of those people.

Its bulling it’s not funny or cool it is just plain sad.

You COULD have talent you know, if you stopped having awful grammer and boring
waste-of-time plots maybe you could be somewhat useful.

This story like all your stories is terrible.

Yet you have the sheer nerve to say that other have bad grammer?

You make me sick, i sujest you delete your coments before you end up doing
something stupid enough the make yourself regret living.

That’s just a warning, i’m worried about you as a fellow fanfiction writer,
please stop this while you still can because not only are you hurting yourself
but you are hurting other people too.
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Story: Inheritors
Chapter: 2. Chapter 2

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141788304
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I bet you think your pretty awsome don’t you?

Going on random fictions, not even looking at them before trolling them.

You think your so cool don’t you? You think writing fanfictions and flaming
them without even reading them is fun?

You hurt people, people hate you, i am one of those people.

Its bulling it’s not funny or cool it is just plain sad.

You COULD have talent you know, if you stopped having awful grammer and boring
waste-of-time plots maybe you could be somewhat useful.

This story like all your stories is terrible.

Yet you have the sheer nerve to say that other have bad grammer?

You make me sick, i sujest you delete your coments before you end up doing
something stupid enough the make yourself regret living.

That’s just a warning, i’m worried about you as a fellow fanfiction writer,
please stop this while you still can because not only are you hurting yourself
but you are hurting other people too. Please
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Story: The One Who Moved
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141788551
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I THIS SUCKED, IT HAD NO FUCKING PLOT!

Also you can’t flame cause i blocked you! Maybe i should flame you for a bit
to see if you like it, sadist.
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…I am pretty sure I’m getting these in the order sent.

Story: Hatred
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141788733
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This sucks how dare you make Misty look like some kind of madman!

Stop trolling fanfiction with dumb stories and get a job!
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Story: The Program’s Answer
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141788804
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Stop flaming me! I get it you don’t ship AshGary please leave me alone! (also
please check your grammer)
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Story: Beginnings
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141788978
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I mean this from the heart.

This sucks, i know you love it when people flame you (?)

But this is terrible, the fact you think you’re “cool” is stupid too, please
stop flaming people its sick.
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Story: SPerl
Chapter: 1. White

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141789019
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CHECK YOUR GRAMMER
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Story: Gyarados Cruelty
Chapter: 1. Default Chapter

From: Dark waffles ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3574442/ )
Reply URL: https://login.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=141789090
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Boo
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I’m curious what their reviewing pattern is. They don’t seem to be clicking around at random but they are mostly hitting newer stories. So why not just work their way through instead of jumping around?

Name: nightfangfox
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2697154/
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Subject: re: Your review to Keronémon

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7701650/

For the exact same reason you did- curiosity. I read it, and I thought it was
good despite the occaisonal spelling issues and grammar mistakes. Feel lucky
they weren’t as offensive as some of the other fanfictions on this site. If
you’re gonna flame, flame those. Otherwise your hate-fires will be used to
roast marshmallows and cook hotdogs and river fish.

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Name: Funkypurplefuchsia
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2366160/
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Subject: Awesome pokemon story you should add to ”Decent pokemon stories”
community.

This fic is called ‘The Order of Arceus: The Spears of Power’ by Queen Palkia.

Summary:
Amber is reborn in a future when an evil dictator rules. A legend tells only
Arceus can stop his rule. So Amber is determined to collect the Plates to
awaken Arceus. But can she with all the confusion, enemies, traitors, and
pressure?

This is a really good fic. It harly has any errors and it’s full of action and
adventure. It’s a really good read. The author doesnt separate the paragraphs
from the dialoge. But that’s just her style.

Funky

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STOP DOING THIS

Name: Weavileleader
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3464322/
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Subject: re: Your review to Pokemon HeartGold Nuzlocke

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7730342/

go to the website, the same concept on it goes for my writing

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Name: Pokemonstories-crazy
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2411850/
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Subject: re: Your review to She’s Cute When She’s Mad

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7724033/

Thanks for all…the tips. Haha, I tend not to be the best with grammar and
get a little carried away when I’m writing. Thanks for the advice.

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Name: Oddittie
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3596727/
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Subject: Thank you for the review

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7733184/

Thank you for the review. Admittedly, I’ve never written anything before and
was confused on how writing dialogue works. I had asked some friends but they
were not able to answer my questions. So thank you for clearing that up for
me. I also wasn’t sure about whether or not capitalizing pokemon would be
appropriate, so thank you for clearing that up too.

As for the part where she walks away from the abused pokemon, I am not only
thinking about my main character I am thinking realisticly. Seeing as she is
an a city very different from the small town she is from I would expect
someone to be confused and react in a way that may not make sense, obviously,
she would not be thinking clearly. If you were in the ghetto of New York city
down an alley by yourself, and you witnessed a man trying to take your money
with a “weapon” (albeit they are dogs) would you immediatly tell him that you
were going to report them? Of course animal abuse is a serious thing and
should be reported, and now that you pointed it out I should have written
something about her addressing the issue, but it was not because I am only
thinking about the main character and not reviewing the story as I write it.
It is because I think that is the reaction that most people would have.

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Name: Trakyan
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3223375/
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Subject: re: Your review to Caramel

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7732238/

ok thanks i’ll fix those error. Im pretty sure i dont need to capitalize
pokemon, you dont capitalize the word ‘dog’ do you?
i also dont bother to much with grammar and spelling in the authors notes. It
doesnt really matter which of the two events is perceived as the current time,
it could be the normal text was the current time and the italics was the
insight into the future, they are just meant to signify different times so the
reader doesnt get mixed up between the two. The note in this chapter(or the
next) says the details are meant to be vague, or at least not very
informative. The only purpose the normal text served was to describe the
creature that is telling the story, the only purpose the italics served was to
say that there was an attack on the village.

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Name: Doctor It
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1819649/
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Subject: I’m sure you absolutely dine on these.

However, as I passed one of your reviews by chance, your extreme enthusiasm
prompted the strange need to comment on it.

I think that your attention to grammar and word flow is quite intelligent.
I find the fact that you have to address reviewers/receivers of your reviews
on your profile quite amusing.

I do not think that adding in comments like “Do you think at all about your
writing?” is conducive or constructive, especially when the writer explicitly
explains that they are just starting.

If you’re channeling personal life frustration, I feel most deeply for you.

Cheers,

Doctor It

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When people have shame without me beating it into them, I’ll stop beating it into them.

Name: WonderHeroe
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2242070/
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Subject: Your Review

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7730469/

Thanks for the structural criticism, I’ll be sure fix my mistakes and keep it
in mind. My only question is why or how is a Songfic banned?

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Name: Ricex3
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3589405/
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Subject: Thank you.

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7732430/

Thank you for the advice. I guess I have to go edit the story now. You made
me realize how terrible I am at writing, but at least I learned something
today.

I dislike how this website doesn’t have indents though. Also, I must admit I
never really thought if I should capitalize a pokemon’s name or not…

I would also like to know if I’m doing the thoughts correctly by italicizing
them.

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Name: Shattered Dream Storms
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3601841/
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Subject: Thanks for the Review

May god allow me to die in a fire. :) I’m sorry I fail to be perfect. Maybe
one day, but it eludes me for now.

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Name: korne-pokemon-luv
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3613582/
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Subject: My story

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7734306/

Thanks for commenting, and I know I’m a realy bad speller since I’m not from
England.
I also know I messed it up in some places, but I was writing this after
running 1.8km
so I was a little tierd. I’ll try replacing some ‘he said’ with ‘Ash said’ but
I don’t
want to use his name at the end of every speech, but thnks for you’re advise,
and sorry
you spent all that time writing all the “He Siad” Because I still don’t get it
:(

Anyway Thank you and feel free to comment as much as you like :)

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Name: NintendoFanfictionManiac
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3425969/
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Subject: re: Your review to Best Friend Shipping

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7735006/

I know that … The next time I write another fiction (you didn’t really have
to be so cold) And I don’t need a beta reader …

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Name: SparklebladeBisharp
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3514577/
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Subject: re: Your review to On the Plane part 1

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7736612/

Listen I don’t follow “rules” ok…. now if you don’t have anything nice to
say… don’t say anything at all… I don’t appreciate rude comments on
stories that I wrote while travelling. I’m guessing you are just a troll
trying to make me look bad, because that is what you are doing. You are really
pissing me off. Who cares if it’s terrible, it’s MY story and I do what I want
to it, and my friends actually like it… so piss off :(

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Name: RenegadeWarrior
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/547047/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Trainer From A Far Away Land

A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7735627/

I do realize that the first chapter is just really sketchy reasoning, but it’s
pretty much just a set up for the main part of the story which is more about N
popping up every now and then and following around Ash and co. Essentially, a
rewrite of the anime with game references and cameos dragged in. Sorry if
this kind of thing bothers you.

The reason for only using 4 moves is to push yourself mentally and think
outside of the box. If you were stuck on a deserted island with a knife and
the clothes on your back, you’ll have to be creative and just work with what
you’ve got and supplement it with whatever you can get from your surroundings.
Many impromtu things are born from necessity and/or desperation. Ash is
already an unorthodox trainer and this is really more for his own benefit than
anything else.

I see that the whole Pikachu being absurdly weak again could have been
explained better. I’m working off a premise I probably should have clarified.

When Zekrom hit Pikachu with the initial attack, physically Pikachu was
unharmed. His checkup showed nothing out of the ordinary and he could move
perfectly well in battle. It wasn’t until he tried to use his electrical
attacks that things went south. Thunderbolt only produced sparks and Volt
Tackle hadn’t even built up a charge and he was panting by the time he stopped
running.

I think Pikachu had something like a block placed on him. Fighting that block
put a strain on his body and by the time it’s been removed, his body is left
to deal with that damage. Pretty much, if you push yourself too hard, you’ll
end up hurting yourself. That same block is still in effect, just toned down
and as the story goes on, it’ll gradually fade.

I kinda get what you mean with Thunder too. Have you ever played the Super
Smash Bros. games?

Thunder works there by calling down a lightning bolt from a storm cloud. If
that bolt reaches Pikachu, the attack becomes stronger than if you move out of
the way. I believe that Pikachu is channeling that energy,adding his own
store of power with it, and making sure that most of the charge isn’t
grounded. The more experience he has, the more he knows how to direct that
flow which results in less energy loss. It’s the same amount of power coming
down, it’s just how it’s actually being used that makes a difference.

Do you think I should mention these things in a note in a future chapter or
have any suggestions? I have a basic plot already set out and not much is
going to change that though.

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Story: Beginnings
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: baaaaa ()
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baaaaa:what a load of bullshit
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Name: squeakypenguins17
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3459808/
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Subject: re: Your review to A fresh start Chapter 1

Touche’ well it was hard when i first started to make it up. but now that i
think back truly it wasnt hard at all it sort of came to me… anyway hope you
are liking the story!

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