Pokeauthor Responses, Part 1

Let the wailing begin.

Sweet-With-Talent | Review
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8860475/

Thank you for taking the time to correct my work and explain the corrections made. You are completely right, this is a badly thought out, poorly written fic. I felt really stupid for posting it without proof-reading or anything of the sort. I just really felt like writing something for this fandom and of Silver, who I really like. If you’d be willing, I would be honored to have you as my beta. I’ve been having trouble really finding a beta who is a grammer nazi and would be kind enough to verbally abuse me into noticing my mistakes both grammer-wise and plot-wise. If you’re willing, of course. A yes or no, will be enough for me. Thank you once again for reading my fic!

L.Hawk | re: Your review to It’s Good Luck To Kiss A Private Eye
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8056607/

I’m sorry I didn’t respond to your review sooner. The truth is, I never really knew what was going on with nervous broad. The storyline was a pretense for the meeting of Diamonds Droog and Pickle Inspector. And I meant for Diamonds and Pickle to be sort of prodded along by the established relationship between Problem Sleuth and Spades Slick; Diamonds knows that Pickle Inspector works wit Problem Sleuth, and knows Spades Slick is in a relationship with Problem Sleuth, therefore he’s interested in Pickle Inspector. The kiss was also intended to be a sort of toying with Pickle Inspector on Diamonds’ part, as opposed to a real sudden romantic interest.
Of course the main purpose of the fic was to be a shipping oneshot, so that influenced the style a bit. The long set up might be something I need to work on, but I wanted to make their meeting at least have some sort of pretext, especially since it created a scenario where toying with a person like that might make some semblance sense, at least to a gangster like Diamonds. I admit the set up was a little long though. I hop you understand the piece better now.

Dammit, why couldn’t I have gotten this in time to put it with last month’s batch?

XXPay4XtraShippingsXX | Responce to review
Okay, your review was one of the longest I’ve ever had. O.o
But thanks for the advice! I try to keep my grammar at its best but I’m only human, so I’ll definitely make alotta mistakes.
And I consider different Pokémon and the actual name to be proper nouns, so that’s my reasoning.
And I was trying to make it a lot like the anime, in which Ash is already kinda forgetful…and it was a moment of uncertainty, when Ash was worried Pikachu felt that he was treating him wrong, and asked Pikachu for clarity.
Thanks, and Happy New Year!
Baxter54132 | Hi
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8862300/

Thanks for the grammar advice,

but did you like the story?

fusionyuugo | re: Your review to New age of Team rocket
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8860731/

k. thanks. and meh this is just a hobby. i’m sure i’m making errors but w.e it’s just a past time.

EKessler | re: Your review to The Greatest Master of Them All
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8860752/

I do appreciate the feedback. Let me just say though, I capitalize Pokémon and their names just because that’s the way I’ve seen it written in books or the games (or other fanfics). You’re welcome to disagree. And in the beginning of the story, I was trying to give a sense of introduction, which I felt was necessary because I began in the middle of the battle, rather than building up to it. It wasn’t simply because I was “fascinated” by the little background details. Also, I find that semifinal battle of the biggest competition in Kanto amounts to a little more than “wanting to win.” Also, I understand that a move like Nightmare would be mundane to people who have used it or have seen it used, but I imagined that it would be more difficult to watch in real life (or anime) if one hadn’t even seen it before. Also, I realize that details are needed, but I try not to overdo it because I feel like it would slow the battle down a little too much, but I will make sure enough of a picture is drawn for the reader, so I can double-check. I’ll also review the POVs. Again, thanks for the feedback.

Dear-Agony-PMD | Reply to your Review
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/8862756/

Oh. My. Freaking. God. Who’s story is it, mine or yours? That’s right. Mine. No one is ever perfect at anything. I know I shouldn’t use it as an excuse, but who frigging cares anymore! I have ADHD, Autism, and PDD-NOS. I’m not frigging perfect! I need something to help me do my school work everyday. If you don’t like how I write, then don’t read the friggin’ story. I will not take comments like this. They make me so mad and want to say, “I don’t care anymore. I quit. I’m going to delete the story.” Because they hurt. Think before you type. I’m not like any of your friends. I have feelings you know! And people hurt them way too much to my liking. As I said before, if you don’t like how I type, then don’t read it. You never said one nice thing about the story in your comment at all, so I don’t friggin care any more.

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