Almost nothing today, it’s rather nice.
TheRealDylanatorA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10994474/
Wow, I never knew that. (Well, school never taught me much.) Also, being pokemon I didn’t know if it had its own rule. Anyway, thanks for the feedback.
Also, I am pointing this out in chapter two, the reason the story seems rushed and lacked detail is because the eevee is telling it, he doesn’t want to talk about it, there will be flashbacks that make the story better.
Farla,
Look, I don’t know who shoved a stick up your ass, but I’m going to stop this right now.
1. As for the Pokémon names being capitalized, it is correct to capitalize it every time because it is the name of a specific species (albeit a fictional one). So check your facts before you try to criticize another person’s work.
2. If you think the template for Ash Betrayal stories is so bad, then let’s see you write one with a different design, so that way, instead of just being a bitch to people you don’t even know, you could give them a new standard of writing to meet.
jmoul18
Of course I’d get this in response to suggesting an easy change to the template to fix the problem. Reading comprehension is well and truly dead.
ChespinTheAltoshipperA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10941713/
Thanks for reviewing and correcting my grammar I will be sure to use this as a helpful guideline.
Enteredcoin1A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10996142/
Yeah I meant to say [childhood love conquers all], but my computer did something change and I just oversaw it. I’ll try to look at the article properly before publishing it next timel
Thank you for your tips because they are actually really helpful, but is there anything positive you like about the story??
LEARN TO TAKE THE HINT, POKEAUTHORS.
This leads me into the realization of a few questions for you:
1. What version of “Coma Theory” are you talking about? The one I’m using is the one from the Creepypasta Wikia.
2. Would the names of Pokemon (or pokemon) be considered the scientific nomenclature, or but simply a name? I was viewing them as scientific nomenclature, and thus capitalized the names. Is that wrong? I also see the term “pokemon” as a Kingdom.
3. Why would it be best to spell out the numbers? Is it of writer’s preference (which I highly doubt, coming from you) or something else?
Thanks for the review, nevertheless.
Ok I’ve got the no capitalizing words like charizard but words like Giratina are names. And the rest of this comment is French to me.
Oh and plz don’t leave grammar correction posts as comments just pm me if you’re annoyed by my bad grammar or spelling
“LEARN TO TAKE THE HINT, POKEAUTHORS.”
Damn, you can’t even say that you like the fact the story ends because it doesn’t.
Why are people so convinced science capitalizes species names? Like, I know it’s mostly an excuse being pulled out of their ass, but why?
Seriously. This is one of those things where 0.5 seconds on Google would save you from looking like an ignorant twat.
They’re presumably just so sure that they don’t bother to check, but those “I’m just so sure” things are exactly the ones you’ve got to make sure you confirm before using them in your argument…
Any time people have internalized something as true but don’t have a reason for it, they’ll believe anything that can explain and justify their belief. All it takes is one person getting it wrong and saying that and everyone else will adopt it because it fits what they were already doing.