Dragon Quill

21h agoPetrol OilA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/9986525/

Thanks. I must have not noticed my dialogue errors, and I do have things that will happen in the story. This prologue is, in a way, a teaser, as I will continue to update it after I’m done with my other one, which is quite short. I have a lot planned for this story, but I need to take the time to write it out so it is perfect, and not rushed.

21h agoSpinning FurretA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/9986027/

You’re quite right about quite a lot of that and also quite wrong about a smaller portion. With your input in mind I plan on updating the first and second chapter.

Thank you for the constructive criticism – not many people do that for my stories, unfortunately, so I am very grateful for it.

18h agoProfessor SycamoreA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/9986110/

Thank you!

15h agotmh1022A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/9988796/

Thank you so much! :) Your grammar advice was very helpful! You also had a good point with the last names.
As for the prologue, it’s short I know, but I’ve seen very popular fanfics with short prologues, so I hope it won’t be too much of a problem.

13h agoVarupikusuA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/9988067/

Oh, so that’s what ‘Drabble’ means… I thought it was like some sort of rabble. That’s what I get when I keep forgetting to look up the word.
BTW, thanks again for posting back the former review. I’ll look into it.

8h agoCityPlum2014Thanks for your review , I will try to make my future stories better .

Bye !

23h agoA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/9984381/I really like your reviewing, and I totally appreciate your advises! xD Of course, porn is banned on this site. But if you do take a look at the amount of these types of stories, it is appalling to see them, since they’re also rated M for that reason… Haha… And I’ve also seen plenty of stories with POVs labeled too xD. No, I’m not trying to be rude by refuting everything you say, it’s just that reviews like these are actually pretty delicate to deal with! :D I truly appreciate your efforts in reading my terribly written fanfictions and some weird little scenes here and there. In all honesty, no one has actually corrected me this fervently. I do love the way you write reviews and everything. It gives motivation to write better. Your review is really helpful, and thanks for the advises. I will keep in mind what you have mentioned. ;)

8h agoFirstly, these kinds of stories aren’t called that. It’s like Fifty Shades of Gray. And I’m not the sole writer who writes these kinds of fiction. I’ve rated them M for a reason as well. And additionally, I did say they’re in the genre of yaoi, and also said that if you don’t like it, don’t read it. I appreciate your warning, but I don’t wish to take these stories down, as people read them. I don’t really care if you think these stories are terrible and goes against your ethics. Maybe you should take time to see how many of these kinds of stories exist, and instead of ranting your complaints in a review, and I’m sure you have complained to other authors like me so flippantly. Don’t tell me where to post and what not, why don’t you see how many people like me post things like these here too. My apologies if I have offended you. Honestly, you should think about other people’s opinions and their efforts in writing these. Everything is literature, after all.

7h agoA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/9985519/I have but one thing to say about the first part. The reason for that will be revealed. And they’re actually not another two. It’s just middle names.

Also, you did not site the quotation properly and i could sue you for that, but I won’t since you don’t know any better. MLA 7 Citation is proper and necessary.

I’ll admit that I was very excited to get this up that I forgot to proofread and I missed that part about the town. However, we’re all human and as such, we all make mistakes. I got carried away there. So just have a little faith. I’ve recently started to say this a lot: “A little faith goes a long way.” I don’t know why, but for some reason, it makes sense. We would’t be able to do half the things that we do if we didn’t have faith. It’s proven throughout history. That’s my explanation for those little “words of wisdom.”

Please note that the goal of this story is to improve the betrayal stories. I’m fixing little things here and there. It’s all a learning process. As I pick up things from here, I will heavily modify my reloaded version of Return of the Fortress General. That, along with Neo Unova Journeys will probably be the two biggest stories I write. I have high hopes for them. I’m also looking forward to how Leaf on an Ash Tree will turn out. My major concern is what I will have for my major Pearlshipping story. I already have Rayshipping planned out. And now I’m just getting plain off-track.

However, I will not be changing this stuff immediately. Although I would like to, I feel I may do a re-write if later parts of the story unsatisfy me as much as this one chapter does.

I hope this cleared things up a bit for you. I truly do look forward to reading your reviews in later chapters of this story.

On a side note, I would like to ask if you could be a beta reader for me. I already have Shaydrall working on Neo Unova Journeys, but he seems a little busy with life right now. Because of this, I feel like I need another pair of eyes on my writing. PM me in a separate line to work out the details if you accept.

Thank you for taking your time to go through the work of reading my response to your rather lengthy review. I actually thought I would just cop out of reading this due to the sheer length, but I got a feeling that I should read the whole thing. And so I did. Boy was it worth it. Thank you again for doing this.

Sincerely,
LRPS

8m agoHello there.You reviewed my fic, A World of My Own Creation, yesterday. I just wanted to thank you for the pointers and corrections you pointed out. After finding your profile I may use your grammar rules as well, if that is okay to improve the problems I have. I appreciate the time you took. Whilst I will not use it in an attempt to excuse myself, I will say that most of my grammar and such is self taught, so once again thank you for the pointers.
As for the point about the huggy ledgendaries, I have looked over the chapter and you were right. I was planning him to meet the Pokemon and ledgendaries he had caught, but I agree it is overly sueish now that I think about it. I am planning to re upload this chapter and alter the stories course looking back at what I wrote, so thank you for that as well

Thank you for your time, I will not take up any more of it.
A.V