Dragon Quill

13 FebFyreDrakon

Seeing that you don’t even know the plot yet, I’d suggest not trying to force me into changing the base elements of the story. Dimensions are different here than you’d think.

I’ve argued with you about capitalization before, so no point there.
Overall, you did not point out anything I didn’t already know, so I’m good there. Thanks for confirming that you indeed do just love being a jackass.

5m ago“This belongs in the Anime world. Find your story under “Manage Stories” and select it from the dropdown menu that says “World: Any” in the “Category” section.”

Here, you did not ask politely, you commanded me. I know the difference between the imperative and interrogative mood, and we both know that was a command. Also, notice the modifier I used on the verb; trying. You attempted to get me to change my work without even understanding that I have reasons beyond the first chapter of why the story has the tags it does.

Honestly, you, and this entire argument, are pathetic. Trying to make yourself look all knowledgeable and almighty. This is FanFiction. I can write what I want to write, as long as it fits within the guidelines, which what I write does. Please, spend your time with people who actually need help. If you’re so high and mighty, be an English teacher, or something along those lines. Actually help people who need it, rather than wasting your time jacking off to the angry and triggered replies you receive from other writers who can’t seem to take harsh criticism.

Have you thought about being nicer with your requests? Adding a little personal touch to anything, whether it be a response to some whiny twenty-one year-old man-child who does nothing all day but sit in his mothers’ basement, or a scathing piece of feedback that has almost no use whatsoever, to (and I understand this example might be a little difficult for you to comprehend) a piece of constructive criticism that lists out likes and dislikes, personal thoughts on how the quality might be improved, and maybe even a compliment.

Now, I understand that you will disregard most of this, but I insist on trying to help other people review other works. If a story really is shit, tell the writer clearly, but be nice to people who put in work and try to make stories for others to read and enjoy. What if I told you every single problem one of your stories had, and did that with everything you’ve ever done? Honestly, stop being an asshole, or quite frankly, someone will rip you a new one.

11m agoI will not block you, here’s why;

I’m not some twelve-year old child who does nothing but try to express themselves on fanfiction, I’m here to improve on writing. I recognized that you seem to have potential as a good reviewer. I’m not mad either, I’m just surprised at how quick you were to judge on the first chapter alone. I will admit, there were some few minor changes here and there that I’m making to make the first chapter more logical and reasonable. Those kind of polishing errors are something I want to have to minimize as I try to become a better writer.

Now, answer this. Did you enjoy reading the first chapter of my story? What did you think was subjectively (not objectively) wrong with it. What did you like, what didn’t you like. Take some time, hell, take a full day. I just want to know that.

Also, you’re right. To me, you’re just someone on the internet. I don’t know you at all, actually, except from the very little I can gleam from your writing style.