Hopefully finishing up here.
xXShadowFusionXx
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5394353/
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Subject: re: Your review to The Legend of the Shadow: Ying and Yang
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10015195/
You…….GRAMMAR NAZI………………………..even if i am not good at my story…..
you shouldn’t do that…………..don’t break my mood of making stories………..
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story are made with a intro before it really begins.
One of the more baffling things is the number of people who apparently had no idea that their stories were breaking a rule. I’m not sure what’s going wrong there – the site
forces you to click through their rules to post a story. Maybe it’s too many words and they just skip it?
Anyways, I am thinking of new story ideas for the Pokemon fandom and I’m am reaching idea block (spoof of writer’s block), where I just think the ideas I come up with myself suck. What would you suggest I do next? Trying to include others’ opinions. It would feature Troy because I love how the group seems to mix together a little more with him, in my mind. If you could come up with an idea you’d like to see me do, PM me back.
wesleydraykeA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10060312/
Fantastic! I’ll give it a good scouring before I post the next few chapters. I’ve already written to chapter seven, but now I know a good deal what I need to improve on.
Titles aren’t my strong suit, but I’ll see what I can come up with. Thanks again!
wesleydraykeA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10060312/
OH, and about Andy’s mother. You’re absolutely right. Blatant plot hole and flaw, I agree. I’ll work on that.
I’m just another writer looking at stories trying to enjoy them, however I come about your review. I would just like to notify you what needs to be seen as your accusations are wrong.
First off for the capitalization, it’s actually down to the preference of the writer in which how they capitalize. In games, they would have the name of a Pokemon capitalized in a sentence, this is a method many tend to use. Here is a huge discussion talking about what could/should be used to capitalize, this was brought up by a person who had to deal with someone who urged them about capitalizing a Pokemon’s name or not.
Next thing is that some sentences are not supposed to throw things out at you.
[Heatran even fought seriously which was rare considering he was a transvestite who was out for blood, especially after meeting Terrakion. ]
Sometimes you will have to infer what the sentence means. Many great authors do not give you the reason of a person’s actions or thoughts away that easily, they want you to think very clearly. What he means after meeting with Terrakion, they had an affair/relationship which has to be inferred by the reader. Also by having that relationship with Terrakion, you would think that he would be a gentle Pokemon and wanting to have a nice reputation while being with Terrakion.
And for the last thing that I didn’t like at all what you wrote, you told the author that his chapter was way too short. The length of a chapter isn’t what makes a story wonderful, it’s how they actually build up the story. And also most likely the first chapter was a prologue introducing you towards the plot of the story. Never judge the book by the little writing you see, judge it by the actual writing that is written by the author.
If you have anything to actually prove any of my theories wrong, please respond back as soon as possible telling me your reason of having an actual valid criticism. And please stop saying the same things, it gets really annoying when I see a story that has really good potential getting put away in the drawer of no return just for you giving criticism like that. I’ve seen some replies you have on your blogspot and their right! However you continue to tell others what they have wrong. It’s a shame that you actually have to do things like that, never learning from experience.
It turns out ” you will need to understand that if you knew very well about fanfiction, Terrakion is commonly known as gay while Heatran is very well known as a transvestite.” and ” I know what transitive is, it’s someone who dresses in the opposite way. What they are trying to say is that Heatran looks more feminine. ” in response to me telling them to google the words and that it’s used as as a slur. They follow up by starting a forum thread.
Forum: Complain About Farla
Well…I must thank you for giving your opinion…although my intention here has never been to create a complete story. I just wanted to describe a scene that takes place at some point of the series I’m writing.
In this story my only intention was to let you know some stuff from my stories:
1-Because you can see Bianca and Touya in the same scene, you can already tell I’m a Rebelshipper.
2-Hydreigon (Deino at the begginning) will fulfill the same role as Ash’s Pikachu, being the strongest and most important member of the team.
3-At some point of the story (thus the fun of the scene) Hydreigon mega-evolves…obviously a fake mega…
Also, I’m not a native english so even if I spellcheck, I can’t help but to not notice some mistakes. But I don’t do it on purpose, that’d be the last thing I’d do here, it’s just that I’m not perfect on Grammar…XD
And for that I demand you apologies.
But of course, we can’t forget this is my fanfiction account, therefore I can upload whatever I consider appropiate to upload…so if you don’t like it, still appreciate the critic, just don’t read.
But if what you want is a more complete story, then wait a bit and I’ll start uploading here my Black and White series…
Thanks for the review, AceTheHydreigon.
Thanks for the feedback. I read some of your other reviews to other stories, and I have a feeling people aren’t as appreciative of your critical reviews. However, your reviewing really helps me become a better writer, and I thank you for that. I’ll fix and update the previos chapters as fast as I can.
And they actually did fix it up! Significantly!
Finally, I was PMed by someone about submitting original works to a charity publication, so check out https://www.facebook.com/synonymsempathy if that sounds interesting to you.
I’m not sure what’s going wrong there – the site forces you to click through their rules to post a story. Maybe it’s too many words and they just skip it?
You… think there might actually exist people who read those instead of just clicking through like mad?
Yes. I’ve read it through myself multiple times.
I’ve read it.
I figured that since at some point, I’d probably stumble and inadvertently screw up on the unspoken norms of the community, the least I could do was make an effort not to blatantly violate the rules somebody had seen fit to write down.
I expect that the people who don’t would at least think to check before arguing it isn’t against the rules. I mean, they at least know they’re not reading the rules, don’t they?