“It’s supposed to be made up.”
1h ago AwesomeGrovyle
That chapter happens to be made by BPM. If you were on CT100, you would understand why we’re doing this. BTW this is not some in-side joke. We’re taking this stuff serious. :l Now good day to you.
18h agoHuskylovers2000
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10039653/
Look i’m not sure if your trying to help me or just making fun of the grammar. If you are trying to help thanks though i’m not perfect with this and might not really remember everything you say though thanks for the help. And if you just gonna point out everything for laughs i’m not perfect ok? I’m not the best but I am trying. Though if i am taking what your saying the wrong way i’m sorry I just wanted to make sure.
17h ago
The String
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10032285/
Oh you are so right sorry but I will try to do better. Thanks for the help.
7h agoBriHarmonDeviantArt
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10019490/
It’s supposed to be made up. And I said it was due for editing. This was just to get the idea out there, because I was bored as hell. Not to mention, I did this based off of a picture I made on photoshop. I had no intention of making this a perfect story.
God people are stupid sometimes.
1h agotrystrike
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10011097/
I don’t know how forums work
1h agoBlack Riolu
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10040457/
I appreciate the review and your nudge in the right direction. I don’t think you should talk to people like that though…people work hard on their stuff so a nudge in the right direction is fine but then you say something like “your character is an idiot…” And it puts a bit on tension there…
14m agoA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10041156/
Okay, then. I’ll make sure I’ll say “I own nothing but the idea of sharing this to people” I like to share my ideas! IS THAT SO WRONG?! I respect that you don’t like this, but I do. Good-bye.
12m agoChocoTheWriter
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10037285/
Yes, thank you for pointing out my mistake. I always get Epilogue and Prologue mixed up. Idk why, just do.
As far as the video thing goes, it’s not a reference to the games when I’m basing the story off of the game. This was a playthrough I was doing for a site project. So, game “references” are gonna be in it.
The whole shrugging off the recognizing of Flannery part was something that he did due to the fact that he needed to get to bed and felt like ignoring it once was not gonna kill him. Yes, he still wants to know who he is and he hopes this adventure will help him find what he’s looking for.
Numbers, written out numerically or worded, are still numbers. don’t see the big deal.
As far as capitalization goes.. they do it in the games, manga, and anime. As long as they keep doing that, so will I.
Any positives you’d like to point out?
People really need to learn not to fish for compliments from me.
Jan 21Jalen Kun
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10030952/
Ah! Hmmm…after looking up the meaning of “explicable” (I’m an idiot), I understand what you mean. In a real situation, Crimson wouldn’t have figured things out as quickly as he did. Ah…I guess my excuse is that it was kind of obvious after getting that bit of memory back and seeing the pictures of Pokemon on the wall. Then again, you’re probably right… And I’d like for this story to be a bit dark and comical at the same time, which is why Red is as he is since there’s really no other way to be before getting your first Pokemon.
And about the semicolon thing, well, I’ve actually never thought of it like that. I sometimes just use it as to not make a simple sentence too, y’know…short? Dull? I don’t know…
Anyway, thanks for the constructive criticism (it actually surprised me at first because I don’t usually get criticism at all!). And I hope you liked and will continue reading my fic! (*^﹏^*)
Jan 22[ I sometimes just use it as to not make a simple sentence too, y’know…short? Dull? I don’t know…]
That’s what commas are for.
I’d like to take a minute here to talk about my actual goals as a review. I have two main goals, and I would rank them in this order:
1) MAKE PEOPLE UNDERSTAND THAT WHAT THEY DID IS A PROBLEM AND I HATE IT.
2) Help by suggesting ways to fix problems.
This is not because I need fresh suffering to infuse into my veins now that I no longer use blood for circulation. That’s just a bonus.
It’s because the most important part of improving is understanding that improvement exists as something to aim for. I may be wrong! My advice may be useless or actively bad. It is valid to look at what I said and decide that it’s a bunch of garbage. But if you look at this, see you fucked up, and think that eh, whatever? That’s when you become a bad writer.
And that’s what we see here.
That’s why, while I like that the prevailing discourse is less DIE YOU STUPID WHORE these days, getting positive responses isn’t my goal. So many of them really amount to “You said a mean thing but I understand you have opinions and it’s okay so let’s be friends now :D”