In which someone actually ALLCAPS pokemon species, there’s a fic about how the pokemon/trainer bond is so very mutual because one rides the other, and a cutesy shipfic with the characters starving to death in a snowed-in cabin.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11718585/1/Pokemon-XY-Afro-s-Journey
There’s about two thousand pokemon fics with journey in the title. Does your story have anything at all to offer beyond being about a pokemon journey? Then your title should probably reflect that rather than just saying it’s a pokemon journey fic.
If you’re doing a fic where a character’s hopping worlds, you need to explain why this matters. Your self-insert has been stuffed into Pokemon XY because…….? What about this story requires it? Why should people care about this character? The only characterization you’ve given them is that this is boring because it happens all the time and their only motivation is to leave again, neither of which sound like they’re interesting.
One of the more deserving of their zero reviews.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
I’m really not sure why you thought a story about characters playing a storygame was more interesting. I mean, if that was that interesting, they’d have their characters immediately sit down for a game of D&D in the game, roll up some characters and then have them sit down to play D&D…
Zero. Also THEY ALREADY LIVE IN AN RPG.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11718666/1/Search-For-Family-Refined
[The shitty old duffel bag that was nearly useless to begin with was starting to completely break open. After hiding under a small tree for shelter from the rain, I thought about what just happened. It was pitch dark outside, and I felt like crying. I felt like I was the only one that questioned whether ten-year-old kids like me should go off on their own without having any real idea what to do.
Oh, wait, I’m sorry, I thought to myself, I was thrown out. My parents always said not to judge someone without reason. I’d be more inclined to think better of them if they weren’t a couple of drunk hypocrites. I tried to defend a relative and they disown me.]
See, as much as that sucks, I can’t think that it sucks a hell of a lot less in the pokemon world where she’s going to get free food and lodging at any town while being able to pursue a well-regarded career that involves playing with magic animals that love you all day.
[I can understand the language of pokemon. ]
This generally doesn’t go very well. Pokemon talking makes the whole capture and train thing look a lot more monstrous.
[“…My uncle was a zoroark, and my cousin was a cross.”
“…Your late aunt didn’t happen to have gone by the name ‘Clara’, did she?”
“That was her.”
“Now I remember. It shook everyone a little bit.”
“Wait, what do you mean cross?” the ralts asked. “So he could transform between a zoroark and a human?”
“That’s what a pokemorph can do.” I answered. “A cross only has the human form, but can use zoroark powers in that human form. Did you see a pokemorph?”
“Yeah.”
“Then what’s a halfling?” Cynthia asked.
“It’s just a word to generalize crosses and pokemorphs into one group.”]
Also a bad sign is pausing the story to explain your very detailed and yet totally unnecessary terminology. Pokemon + human = cross? Okay fine. Also there’s a separate thing called a pokemorph which in this fic unlike most fics means someone who can change back and forth, and we’re hearing about this despite it being irrelevant to the conversation, and also there’s a third word to refer to both of them for even less reason?
Zero. We’re still on the 6th, by the way.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11718864/1/Bright
Haiku.
One.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719192/1/Battle-Chronicles
Nonstory chapters are banned.
Don’t ask for OCs. Make up what OCs your story actually needs to fit whatever purpose you need them for.
Blocked!
Zero.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719481/1/The-Evolution-of-Bagon
Another poem.
One.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719501/1/Misty-s-Trouble
Paragraphing has rules. You start a new paragraph with a new subject. The goal is not to divide your story up into even blocks. Also, a new speaker means you start a new paragraph.
Also, the plot of this is awful. It’s a rapid-fire string of events that barely follow each other with a side trip into handing Ash a pile of legendaries and other super pokemon for no reason at all.
They end by saying they’re fourteen. I look forward to them insulting fourteen year old me by saying I can’t expect better from a kid like them.
Zero. Two favs and one follow, though. Christ.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719598/1/Pokemon-Z-New-Generation
Write out numbers with letters.
Trainers start at ten. Starting young is absolutely traditional so your explanation that she couldn’t because her parents are too traditional doesn’t fly and even if you had thought of a less stupid justification it wouldn’t change the part that starting at seventeen makes for a terrible story full of her getting her ass kicked by eleven year olds.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
[Hmm..I hope this Fanfiction isn’t obnoxious…since y’know..it is OC-centric.. ]
The problem is definitely everything else.
One.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719658/1/Pok%C3%A9mon-Mystery-Dungeon-Explorers-of-Truth-and-Ideals
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
Blocked!
One.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719727/1/Pokemon-Dynasty-Ranger-and-Rai
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
[the TOTODILE ]
[small RAICHU]
[a PIKACHU ]
Stop it.
It’s “okay”, four letters.
Semicolons should only ever be used when connecting two complete sentences and even then almost never.
Zero.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719741/1/How-the-Eevee-Show-became-Eeveelutions-and-Friends
Your formatting is a horror show. Next time, look at what you uploaded before you post it.
There’ve been a lot of these this time. Something new about the upload process?
Zero.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719859/1/Soaring-with-Charizard
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
[Isabelle Evergreen and her Charizard were very close. They trusted each other with their lives, literally. Charizard fought for her in battles and Isabelle rode on his back when they would go flying together. Such an exhilarating activity was not only for fun. It built trust in each other, which was the foundation of any relationship, in this case between Pokémon and human.]
…okay, so what you actually just wrote is “They were really close because her pokemon did something for her and other times her pokemon did another thing for her.” If you want to sell them as having an actual relationship, she needs to do more for her charizard than giving him orders so he can win battles to make her rich and famous.
One.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719867/1/How-we-came-to-be-Team-Nova
Capitalize your title properly.
If you have an actual story to write, write that instead of yet another copy of the standard PMD opening everyone else already wrote.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
[This Pokemon ]
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
Zero.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719888/1/The-Journey-Begins
Thousands of people have used this title already. Find one that actually says something about your story rather than just its general genre.
Starting a story with your character waking up is terribly overdone and was boring the first time.
Write out numbers with letters.
[I stood about 5’11” ]
You cannot be “about” a height that’s precise down to the inch.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
[ALL I KNEW WAS I WAS GOING TO BE AN EXTRAORDINARY ADVENTURE.]
You seem to have misspelled “unspeakably boring” there.
One, which is crit, and yet it opens with, Hm, an OC trainer fic. Props on using an original region. I’ve seen so many writers copy the exact plot from the games. Yes the way it said it was a new region before he walked to the professor to get his choice of charmander, bulbasaur and squirtle followed by having a first battle was truly a cut above the usual plot copying.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11719967/1/You-Shall-Never-Betray-Me-You-Shall-Never-Leave-My-Side
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
If this story is supposed to be going somewhere, you probably should’ve actually gotten that far instead of cutting off at saying something big was maybe going to happen at some point.
One, crit.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11720033/1/Pokemon-Kitsune-no-G%C5%8Dsuto-en
Write out numbers with letters.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
It’s TV.
It’s “okay”, four letters.
“It’s” means “it is”. “Its” is the possessive form.
Well, this is definitely a different opening than usual, and I like that we’re starting off with non-trainer characters and actual things happening and all that. Plus the fact he teleported in from another region and the TV is saying the fires there have some mysterious cause suggests something fun’s going on with that.
Two, one crit disagreeing it’s interesting.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11720197/1/Mega-Evolution-and-Zygarde
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
Paragraphing has rules. You start a new paragraph with every new subject, not just when a new person speaks.
Zero.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11720322/1/My-Tittle
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
Semicolons should only ever be used when connecting two complete sentences and even then almost never.
[ How do I know they’re called Pokemon? ]
Really not a question anyone asked. The real question is how he knows what animals are.
One extended crit.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11720468/1/WHY-ME
[As I sat on my bed I thought about what had happened only hours ago…]
Why are you opening with one line to trigger a flashback when you could just start the story in the past?
And don’t label flashbacks, it should be clear from context.
Names always get capital letters, not just sometimes.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
Two.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11720750/1/Start-of-Summer
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
Semicolons should only ever be used when connecting two complete sentences and even then almost never.
Zero.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11720786/1/Event-Horizon
I’m gonna just class this as poetry.
Three.
Semicolons should only ever be used when connecting two complete sentences and even then almost never.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
This is full of mood whiplash – they’re starving to death with their pokemon in a freezing cabin, but also they’re flirting. Ash’s pokemon is killing himself trying to keep the place warm, but also they’re doing the whole omgcan’ttouchsecretcrush thing rather than huddling for warmth. They’re finally rescued but Clemont wasn’t actually concerned for them because he’s too busy going lol saw you kiss.
Three, one of which praises the flawless grammar.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11721232/1/Betrayal-of-the-Dark-Eon
Write out numbers with letters.
Dialogue is written as “Hello,” she said or “Hello!” she said, never “Hello.” She said or “Hello.” she said or “Hello,” She said or “Hello” she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. (“Speak” is not a speech verb.) In that case it’s written as “Hello.” She grinned, never “Hello,” she grinned or “Hello,” She grinned or “Hello.” she grinned. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s “Hi,” she said. “This is it.” not “Hi,” she said, “this is it.” or “Hi,” she said “this is it.” And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s “Hi. This,” she said, “is it.” The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.
[ to mom ]
[the Barrier pokemon. ]
If something’s used as a name, it’s capitalized like any other name. If it isn’t a name, it’s not capitalized.
[Time skip – Outside]
Don’t do this. Figure out how to write proper scene transitions.
Four.
It’s interesting how odd bits seem to be part of the betrayal formula, like the legendary pokemon showing up to tell Ash he’s awesome. I wonder if this stuff was in whatever original request started it?
[It’s interesting how odd bits seem to be part of the betrayal
formula, like the legendary pokemon showing up to tell Ash he’s awesome.
I wonder if this stuff was in whatever original request started it?]
Opening tropes are copied to a fanatical extreme, be it waking up or Llama God tell you that you’re special.
I’ve found three proto ash betrayal fics in 2001 that tend to do mostly with team rocket and focuses on the original trio and Team Rocket. The legendary thing evolved over time.
Ah, so it’s just evolving.
Hey, it’s been awhile. I’m going back to read from Day 1, but I’m just… really glad this still exists. I just broke up with my boyfriend of three years, so seeing this is a good thing. Yeah. Okay. I’m glad you’re still here.
<3 take care of yourself, and if you need to talk feel free to drop a line
uh, hey… I might want to take advantage of that, since you actually may have insight into a couple things. I don’t know how you want me to contact you though. My skype is the same username, if that helps? I don’t know.
You can drop me a line via act319(at)nyu(dot)edu, which will forward to my IRL email. ^^;
:( Sorry you’re going through that.
Reliably doing stuff and never letting it go is my best trait!
It kind of got more dramatic in terrible ways, but I’d feel bad bringing it into your pokemon reviewtime and don’t have your email. But I’ve got some A+ friends IRL and Act had some choice advice as well. (Which I appreciate so much, thank you, Act.) So I’ll be okay.
I’m glad for that, at least. I’d be terrible for advice anyway. Hope things get better soon.