Our opening salvo is a mixed bag.
PokeWritersHi
Thank you for your review and advice. we have adjusted the chapter accordingly. I’m sorry I couldn’t respond directly however we are having difficulties with the website review system not showing reviews .
Pokewriter Arkilos.
May 21Noivern95
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/11955968/
Uh…….Excuse me? How is my format lead you to screenwriting and not writing a story?
You’re being incoherent. I have no idea what you’re saying.Ok, I understand what your saying but is it fair for you to ban me from a website where I share my stories the way how I say things? I undertand that my format is not the common way of writing a story but I write the story in POV. I do that because I can get emotion and character development better this way.I’m not the one who would ban you; it’s simply against the site’s rules.Wait what? Isn’t that unfair for writers like I who write stories in POV formYou can take it up with the administrators, but I believe the reason is that this site is supposed to be prose-exclusive. And for good reason, because script format is really meant for a visual medium. If you’re writing text, you should get the most out of it by describing stuff properly.So, instead of POV where you visualize what is happening, it should be in story mode where it is detailed and you just read it. I can change the format, I just thought that, it was that they just don’t allow that kind of story or formatMay 21
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/11955109/
Do not say “It’s a TV Script!”
Why not?its mean…Why? o_ONever hmindMay 21
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/11955722/
Well I’m sorry it isn’t “Perfectly Perfect” for you so how about I delete the dang story!
Do you want to do that?Already did that, good bye! FOREVER!You’re being childish. If the opinion of one nobody sends you into this much of a tailspin, you might want to publish your work on a private blog instead of a public forum.The fanfic was not meant to be taken seriously! I am new anyway! it seems you think you are good at fics so go make one, idiot!May 21
Later:
I apologize for the rude words, I was angry that day, and I know you were trying to help. I still hated the story I made though. Write back if you read thisI accept your apology. Keep in mind that I can’t read what you’re sending me if you block me, though! (Except the email backup, but that gets truncated.):)May 23
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/11960101/
Your words do not fall upon deaf ears. However, capitalizing important words like Zangoose and Pokemon is simply a habit of mine I have yet to grow out of. I’m still learning about proper writing, so there are bound to be some mistakes here and there, especially considering I don’t have an editor. But for now just let me do my thing and I’ll grow out of it eventually.
And I’m too lazy to actually go back and fix the capitalization anyway. XD
The English language can be hard sometimes…
However, I’m not to lazy to listen to your other point. I see what you’re talking about when I should hook my reader with a proper first chapter and not just have some half-assed couple of lines. I will go back and combine the prologue with the first chapter and see how that works out for me.
I know I may have sounded slightly ignorant of your review, but I really do appreciate you trying to help me in order to make this story worthwhile. This is a type of review I rarely get, with people just saying “good job” or “keep it up”. And don’t get me wrong; I appreciate those reviews! But sometimes you just need someone to tell you to fix a few things.
So thank you! ;)