“And since part of your penname is Elmo yeah dude Elmo is for kids not adults. So grow up!”
Responses are otherwise appreciative, including a few messages in support of me re: the Blaze conflict.
Error52qfgA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12913430/
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7142086/
The hospital money thing was a fair point, actually. Currently working on a Pokémon fic where the main character lives in america, so I think I got the wires grossed.
Use of “Gadgeteer Genius” wasn’t a TV Tropes reference (although I do read the site), wasn’t actually thinking of it until you mentioned it.
I mostly went for pure absurdity rather than coherence, since I had a deadline and didn’t necessarily have time to come up with a real plot.
Criticism appreciated.
RogueMustangMareI still can’t understand your review on my story so thanks for you wasting my time I have to reupload the story in order to get your deplorable review off my story. Seriously, you talk about how people need to work on their grammar? Okay how about you work on how to write a review. Reviews are meant to be short and to the point not making them long and arduous. Until you learn this, you should not write anymore reviews and if you don’t like how the story is written then don’t leave a review, just don’t continue reading it. I’m not changing MY story just to suit YOUR needs. It is my story and mine alone and if you don’t like how I’m calling you out than don’t continue to read any of my stories because I will block you if you try.
[I have to reupload the story in order to get your deplorable review off my story.]
Wow, you’re petty. Enjoy losing all your follows and favorites.
If you think you know how to do reviews better, I submit this for your attention: https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/11834/145347524/1/So-I-saw-your-reviews-and-I-think-you-should
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Yeah you guys don’t make good arguments. So have a nice life idiot. And stop trying to make people write their stories as you would write them. That’s not how a story is written.
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By the way, there is a way to get rid of your reviews, it’s called I gotta take it off and than reupload it when I finish editing it and adding more chapters. Than I get to block you and make it to where you can’t get on any of my stories. And I don’t have to worry about no favorites or reviews because plenty of other people read my stories and they don’t to want me to write it their way. So that’s just you being a selfish and insecure little boy. And since part of your penname is Elmo yeah dude Elmo is for kids not adults. So grow up!
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I’m a little surprised more people don’t know what St. Elmo’s fire is. It was a pretty common phrase I encountered as a kid.
[not author, anonymized for protection]A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12890760/
I really don’t understand why people act like you’re being rude. I haven’t seen many of your reviews, but this one is completely true.
[anonymized for protection]I saw a story online earlier when searching for new fanfictions to read that was purely complaining about your reviewing process. I’m really sorry that this happened, especially since you are only trying to help people grow as writers. I know the advice you’ve given me has helped a lot, and I look forward to you potentially having any more advice for me in the future. I’m sorry some people don’t see the constructive part of the constructive criticism you give. I hope you continue to give helpful advice to authors in the future, and that others can see how your tips can help.
Thank you for the support. Do not worry, though, I am undeterred.
e.b woodhouseJUST SO YOU KNOW YOU HAVE NO SUCCEDED IN SLIENCIN ME, I AM AN ARISST AND DESERVE TO BE HEARD
THE TRUTH DESERVES TO BE HEAR!
Cool story bro. Why’d you follow me?This person gave me a follow out of the blue shortly before sending this. They still haven’t responded.
Nerf585Hey i don’t like the review you put on my friend Zerodone’s story. If you have nothing positive to say THEN SHUT THE FUCK UP.
I don’t fight proxy wars. If your friend has a problem with me, they can tell me themselves.Cant. He lost his phone. No joke.I still want to hear it from the horse’s mouth. Your friend can contact me when he has internet access again.I said he lost his phone not wifi.Goddammit. Hi this is the real Nerf585. Sorry bout that. My cousin got access to my account and well you can see what he did.??????
St Elmo’s Fire,
A new review has been posted to your story.
Story: Do No Harm
Chapter: 1. Home and Hearth
From: Damashii ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5477241/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=260401429
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Some people really are just mindless and immature. These people are far too dense to understand constructive criticism. That, or they’re just 10 year olds who want to look “cool” and go with the flow. It’s annoying to see so much unreasonable hate towards someone who’s only trying to help.
I’d also like to thank your for your review on my one story(for how long that was up), it helped to see where I could have went wrong.
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Ah, I see it. Yeah, that wasn’t me. There are trolls going around trying to slander me. Just delete it.
Thank you for confirming.
So you’re a constructive critic just like me. We need more constructive critics on FFN.
I knew that the counter reviews would backfire on our hecklers sooner or later. It’s really great to see that you’ve been getting messages of support.
This person gave me a follow out of the blue shortly before sending this. They still haven’t responded.
Ah, I encountered that person as well. They randomly favourited and left a nonsense review on one of my stories. I engaged with them for a while to see if I could extract any genuinely useful criticism from them, but no such luck.
[Reviews are meant to be short and to the point not making them long and arduous.]
… Does this person even know what an actual review is? Has she (I did some research on this person and I’m pretty sure it’s a woman) seen reviews made by other people (not you, Talarc, Enki and Farla) on other stories?
Because I get the feeling that she hasn’t.
“By the way, there is a way to get rid of your reviews, it’s called I gotta take it off and than reupload it when I finish editing it and adding more chapters. Than I get to block you and make it to where you can’t get on any of my stories. And I don’t have to worry about no favorites or reviews because plenty of other people read my stories and they don’t to want me to write it their way.”
Oooooh, someone is really butthurt to the max.
“And since part of your penname is Elmo yeah dude Elmo is for kids not adults. So grow up!”
By the same logic, no one named “Kevin” can be taken seriously because Kevin from Home Alone is a little kid.
Oh, and I’m pretty sure Saint Erasmus of Formia aka St. Elmo, was an adult, seeing that he was a bishop.