“I have seen that you also use bad grammar yourself, you hypocrite […] you use “I’m” instead of “I am” and “don’t” instead of “do not” to give mention to your poor grammar, as well as you typing “pokemon” when it should be spelt “Pokémon” (capital “P” and a “é” instead of an “e”).”
BookWormOfBibliophileA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13073763/
Oh thank you very much, I’m going to take your advice and see if I can edit right now, btw the Horizonal lines, do I need a certain amount to do that or do it just like I did in the beginning.
I’m not sure what you mean. Just put them where you think they’re appropriate. Some people use them for scene breaks as well.You have received a message from:
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Alright, again thank you so much, I really apricate it ^-^
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Then they blocked me, for some reason.
Various OpticonA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13072625/
You reviewed about tags many times, JUST enough for me to see it at least once..
I don’t need an insane amount of readers, so could you stop your ‘anime-tag’ tantrum, pls?)
I’ll stop when you tag.Why? You want more anime tagged stories?I don’t even look only for game-tagged, or anime tagged fics though, so I thought people don’t pay much mind to that.
I can’t believe I have to explain this to you, but just because you don’t care about something doesn’t mean no one does. Over 31,000 Pokemon fics are labeled under a world. It’ll take you five seconds and makes a lot of peoples’ lives easier.Okay, I’ll begin posting anime-tagged fics. I’ll keep doing so If I’ll be satisfied with the amount of reviews, that is. 3-4 will do. Otherwise, I’ll put the games-tags again.
And yeah, I’ll take my words back, about me not wanting much readers. That was dumb of me, I DO need them. Even if I write awful stuff, some seem to like it.
[Otherwise, I’ll put the games-tags again.]
Wait, you’re actually deliberately putting it under Games? Why? All you’re doing is annoying people who are purposefully looking for game fic. People who don’t care about the worlds will see it anyway, since everything shows up by default.
As I said, I did only play the game, but I’ve never seen the anime, though I knew there was Pokemon anime. I didn’t want to mistake things and annoy anime fic readers, since I thought everything in anime was different than in games.Well, I’m gonna change things now.
Also, i wanted to ask a question. What proper ‘games-tag’ pokemon fics are like? They have to resemble the game by describing the step-by-step battles? If you have a great example of one, could you show me?
The games, anime, and manga all have differences in the plot and world. They’re subtle in the earlier gens but more pronounced in the later ones. The game world is basically the default, and if you’re including characters or plot events from the anime or manga, I would think you should label the story as such.
NebulaDreamsA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13074374/
Hello Elmo,
Thanks for picking up this story! I don’t mind you skipping out on the other one. I’d rather people read at their own pace. In any case, I appreciate you picking this story up! I’m glad you’re enjoying this so far, even with the introduction.
Ack! I copy-pasted the text from my own Serebii post since FFN doesn’t like me formatting from word, and that site automatically filters swears, so it showed up on here. I’ve edited the document so hopefully, the swear should show up as intended.
DPLxBeAsTxSnIpEA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13071912/
Thank you for taking the time to review my work.
Good catch on the brunette/brunet thing. Laptop auto-corrects it to the feminine version for some reason, so that edit has been made. Same with the missing space and improper speech verb in the sentence you pointed out. Thought I caught everything in it.
I already use horizontal lines as my scene transitions, as there are three protagonists in third person and I plan on writing from more than just one character’s view. This chapter just only happened to be from Alana’s.
The journey to fame won’t be the end all be all. That’s more of a means, not an end. Their end goals will be shown as the story progresses throughout this first region, and they’ll work towards them as they move on to Sinnoh and Unova.
As for the battles, I plan on making them more diverse. After reading it again, the fights do seem more mechanical. I’ll definitely work on those (getting into the trainer’s head, making the physical effects more prevalent) as I continue on.
Thanks again,
-DPL
Jocelyn24A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13074155/
I appreciate the time and thoughtfulness you put behind your constructive criticism, although I don’t agree with parts, the dialogue was definitely spot on.
The main reason I’m replying, however, is that I have received 2-3 PMs telling me to block you and a few other people lol, what’s that about?
Check the link in my profile.You have received a message from:
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Subject: Yet Another Idiotic Grammar Critic
F off, grammar critic (AKA a bully). You are not needed. I have seen that you also use bad grammar yourself, you hypocrite. Also, I read from someone that people should just avoid you because you are an arrogant person that thinks he/she knows everything when he/she does not. Not to mention you use “I’m” instead of “I am” and “don’t” instead of “do not” to give mention to your poor grammar, as well as you typing “pokemon” when it should be spelt “Pokémon” (capital “P” and a “é” instead of an “e”).
Well, this is just you embarrassing yourself in front of people. But that is what idiots such as yourself do. I am glad I could pick up on your poor grammar and put you in your place.
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They have no stories, so I’m not even sure why they’re contacting me.
ReshiramuHey, thank you a lot for the crit! I had actually meant for that to be a oneshot, and it seems I missed marking it completed – my mistake, though it definitely could use more fleshing out. I’ll probably have to revisit that at some point when I get a chance to get off my phone – I accidentally broke my other device recently.
[Not to mention you use “I’m” instead of “I am” and “don’t” instead of “do not” to give mention to your poor grammar]
This… this person isn’t actually serious, are they? Either he/she is too upset to think straight or we have reached the point where the haters are scraping the bottom of the barrel for arguments.
[Well, this is just you embarrassing yourself in front of people. But that is what idiots such as yourself do. I am glad I could pick up on your poor grammar and put you in your place.]
Irony!
Sadly, this is what haters do.
I don’t get why people get this upset. I thanked Elmo for his review, especially since he pointed out things I missed.
Or, if you don’t like the review, just ignore it. It isn’t that difficult…
AUTOCOOOOORRRREEEEEEEEECT!
[Not to mention you use “I’m” instead of “I am” and “don’t” instead of “do not” to give mention to your poor grammar, as well as you typing “pokemon” when it should be spelt “Pokémon” (capital “P” and a “é” instead of an “e”).]
I am not one who usually gives fucks to this type of shit, but hell am I going to let this slide. You have to be a native speaker of a different language to argue something like that, come on now. Using “I’m” or whatever is nothing negative; in fact, it’s correct. If someone ever said that to me then I’ll do one thing: school them. Should have told him to delete his account, along with his “I’ms and do not.” Also yes, pokemon is spelled as “pokémon,” but not all people have the é on their keyboard, nor are we going to waste our lives for an e.
Also, also no! You don’t always capitalize the P in pokemon as it is also the name for the creatures, not just the title of the series.
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You guys should make an Everything Wrong With Fanfic Writers. Lol