“This story isn’t good and that’s why I posted it here. Where it belongs.”
GoodGuyFanFictionA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13257934/
Yo what up that’s a nice sentiment intill that last bit. That was mean but hey what can you do. This story isn’t good and that’s why I posted it here. Where it belongs.
[This story isn’t good and that’s why I posted it here. Where it belongs.]
That’s a far meaner thing to say about this website and community than anything I said in the review. Grammatical incoherence does not belong here. If you want to post something publicly, you owe it to your readers to at least make it basically comprehensible.
If you are unfamiliar with grammatical rules, there are several open-access guides throughout the internet, including one on this very site: https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/11834/21887406/1/Writing-Guide-Part-One-Grammar
Got blocked for this.
cabritinhoThank you for the feedback. I welcome all sorts of criticism on my works.
I would have to agree with you that I left the first chapter too open ended. If anything, chapter two probably should have been included in the first, however, I didn’t feel like they flowed well together (because of the implied time skip, there’s a drastic change in location).
I was struggling with whether I should have added more to the first chapter, but I just couldn’t think of what, so that’s why it is, as you’ve said, too short and open ended. I don’t think I’ll be changing it as of now since I’ve already progressed from that point, but I will keep the advice in mind for any future works.
They went on to say they were leaving the fandom because of Sevenways’ harassment.
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Subject: Reviews
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St Elmo’s Fire,
A new review has been posted to your story.
Story: A Humourous Easter
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
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Go away. Pokemon names should be capitalized, your formatting dialogue incorrectly, your dropmenu is useless.
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Apparently this is another Sevenways sock, so add it to your block list.
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Subject: re: Your review to Team Riot
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13257564/
Honestly, I don’t understand why people say that people like you give bad reviews, it’s just your opinions. Anyways, here’s what I have to tell you.
For the Arceus thing, you are right in the sense that they don’t really know whether or not they have a god or such. However, I’m intending for this story to have somewhat human Pokemon with actual civilizations and such. That being said, there would also be a supreme being, and in the case of the Sinnoh plot, that would be Arceus.
I do like the advice with the moves, though. Never really thought of it that way.
And I’m pretty sure Lucarios have spikes on the back of their hands, not on the palms.
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Also, in the games, they capitalize the Pokemon’s species even without the nicknames, so yeah, it’s kind of second nature to capitalize their species names.
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Also got someone arguing that while they agree non-capitalization is grammatically correct, I shouldn’t say it because the author could theoretically be doing it for stylistic purposes, by which they mean mindlessly copying the official media that did it for legal purposes. Farla might need to make a thread explaining what a stylistic break actually is.