The Other Pokeauthors, Part 152

Some extremely low-effort revenge reviews, and otherwise not much.

Seriously?
Jun 12Shooting Star Dragon 3000
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13310383/

Dude, don’t be a dick. I’m working on the chapter right now. Is it really wrong to let the people who follow me that I’m back and I got something in the works?

2h agoI have a legit question for you: why are your trying to hunt out every new m rated Pokemon story that comes out?
secs agoI’m not. I simply try to review as many stories as possible. What on Earth is making you think I’m targeting M-rated stories in particular?
secs ago(Also, to answer your first question, yes, it is. The archive is for stories. It’s rude to push other authors’ stories off the front page just to make an announcement. If people are following you, they’ll get an alert when you post the actual story anyway.)

Got blocked for this. Answering questions: my greatest crime.

Thank you.
12 JunCaseyNightwind
I appreciate the Criticism you gave, I actually learned a bit that I wasn’t aware of so thank you. I also appreciate listing some of the mistakes you found, quite a few of them I had “previously” fixed. My document must not have saved after I did my last read though and editing before posting it. I might not have realized this without you so thanks once again.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Casey~

St Elmo’s Fire,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: The Darkness Between Stars
Chapter: 1. Reunited

From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270190273
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f*** you

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St Elmo’s Fire,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: A Present For Delibird
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270249097
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F*** you troll

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St Elmo’s Fire,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: The Darkness Between Stars
Chapter: 13. Together Alone

From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270249112
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S*** story

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St Elmo’s Fire,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Monsters
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270249135
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F*** you d***

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This was in response to me being unimpressed by their trollfic.

re: Your review to Grayscale
12 JunBlee Bleep
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13308499/

solid review m8

i’ll try to correct it as much as i can

Hey^^
13 JunCircusControl
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13307151/

Thanks for taking time out of your day.

I’ll try and get better at writing in english in the future, but for the moment I’ll have to play the non-native speaker card.

Your criticism is sound overall. The only point I think deserves defending is that demographic stats only look underwhelming when you read them. Putting it into perspective, it’s pretty much 1,5 kid out of 10 dying in the wild every year.

Thanks anyway and I hope you come back for the second chapter c:

2 Comments

  1. Venompaw says:

    Just noting the font used for the review messages strains the eyes. I preferred the previous format.

    Keep up the good work of reviewing the Pokemon archive.

     

  2. Huh, that’s interesting. I forgot to paste raw. It’s fixed now.

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