Some extremely low-effort revenge reviews, and otherwise not much.
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13310383/ Dude, don’t be a dick. I’m working on the chapter right now. Is it really wrong to let the people who follow me that I’m back and I got something in the works?
Got blocked for this. Answering questions: my greatest crime.
I appreciate the Criticism you gave, I actually learned a bit that I wasn’t aware of so thank you. I also appreciate listing some of the mistakes you found, quite a few of them I had “previously” fixed. My document must not have saved after I did my last read though and editing before posting it. I might not have realized this without you so thanks once again. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Casey~
St Elmo’s Fire,
A new review has been posted to your story.
Story: The Darkness Between Stars
Chapter: 1. Reunited
From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270190273
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f*** you
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St Elmo’s Fire,
A new review has been posted to your story.
Story: A Present For Delibird
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270249097
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F*** you troll
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St Elmo’s Fire,
A new review has been posted to your story.
Story: The Darkness Between Stars
Chapter: 13. Together Alone
From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270249112
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S*** story
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St Elmo’s Fire,
A new review has been posted to your story.
Story: Monsters
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1
From: patman2 ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12299435/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=270249135
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F*** you d***
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This was in response to me being unimpressed by their trollfic.
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13308499/ solid review m8
i’ll try to correct it as much as i can
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/13307151/ Thanks for taking time out of your day.
I’ll try and get better at writing in english in the future, but for the moment I’ll have to play the non-native speaker card.
Your criticism is sound overall. The only point I think deserves defending is that demographic stats only look underwhelming when you read them. Putting it into perspective, it’s pretty much 1,5 kid out of 10 dying in the wild every year.
Thanks anyway and I hope you come back for the second chapter c:
Just noting the font used for the review messages strains the eyes. I preferred the previous format.
Keep up the good work of reviewing the Pokemon archive.
Huh, that’s interesting. I forgot to paste raw. It’s fixed now.