The Other Pokeauthors, Part 160

A revenge review from someone I reviewed 4 years ago for some reason, and one extremely chill response.

A response to your review at
The Doctor’s Charlene
I totally see where you’re coming. I didn’t mean to come off as rude or entitled as you put it. I don’t mind people telling me about mistakes I’m making. I just don’t want those long reviews warning me about them. So I really didn’t mean to come off that way and I don’t want people to think of me that way so I’ll get rid of the note saying that because I dont want my readers to think of me that way so I’m sorry.
Oh, sorry for going off on you then. I’ve had bad experiences with authors who have said similar things in the past.

St Elmo’s Fire,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Progress
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Sylver-sky ( )
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You should really start a new sentence when you introduce a new line of dialog. That is, after all, the “rule” when it comes to writing. Also, bits of the dialog do not show who is actually talking. this can be confusing. And there is no real definition between paragraphs. This writing style appears to be formatted in more of a script than a story.


re: Your review to Progress

A response to your review at

I see someone has not read many actual books.

[To start I love getting reviews on my stories. Now, when I say reviews, I mean REVIEWS. I do not welcome those who pick apart my spelling and grammar, or have ANYTHING to say about my writing style. I have taken plenty of classes and have developed my own style, and will not be changing it just because you don’t agree with it. If you are going to review my story, then review the STORY. I do occasionally use other languages in my writing, mainly Spanish. If I do make a mistake with that, feel free to let me know. Other than that, please keep reviews to the story itself.]

Interesting that you demand this of others, but can’t seem to do it yourself. Spelling, grammar, and writing style are all crucial parts of writing and valid topics for review. Get over yourself.

Do I know you?

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