“It’s my story, jackass. I’m not required to put in line breaks. Go fuck yourself.”
DragonFoxloverI was reading the reviews on your stories and from what i saw you have absolutely no right to judge my writing and as far as your criticism
1. their is not a authors others not so shut up you retard
2. i may have switched POVs couple of times and i got a second opinion from a successful writer its pretty straight forward.so with these things in mind don’t talk to me about my writing style when yours is shit
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I have every right to judge your story. That is the purpose of the review feature. If you don’t want feedback, there are plenty of other venues for posting stories, such as personal blogs.
If you don’t want me to talk to you, you can block me.
[their is not a authors others not so shut up you retard]
I also don’t know what you’re referring to here. Once again, you need to put effort into communicating if you want to be understood.
The Dragon BrothersDust:Does it have to be?…….Flame it if you want, but I wont let one critic stop Koko Story
Super Mario UniverseA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12276966/ Are you SERIOUSLY gonna do this to me again?! You already criticized my last pokemon story!
Do I know you? If you don’t want me to bother you, you should block me.They have no other Pokemon fics listed, so I have no idea what they’re talking about. This is why you shouldn’t do spite deletions, people.
They finally worked up the nerve to block me after several hours, though, so hopefully this will be the end of that.
Michael15A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12280064/ What do you mean by that
Oh, you were serious? The trend of “I’m gonna be MATURE and EDGY unlike those squares at Nintendo” is a common one, and it was beaten to death basically as soon as it emerged. It’s not nearly as clever or original as you think it is, and you might want to think about what you’re actually trying to accomplish by telling the story.Dude, have ever even seen a reality show before? Reality shows are supposed to be mature and edgy. Just look at The Total Drama series and The Jersey Shore or Keeping up with the Kardashians. I’m going to add a lot of other things, like sex, drama with the girls, fighting over Ash. I’m going to reveal more of Dale’s awesome pokemon and the fact that he’s a gym leader. Remember, reality shows are supposed to be edgy and mature. 
EternalSushiA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12280906/ Thank you for the review! I appreciate it greatly. Thanks for pointing out those errors as well – they’ve now been corrected! Hopefully you’ll be around for future chapters when the humor gets out of hand.
Horseylover17A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12281036/ Ok thanks for the tip
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Subject: re: Your review to Eight Little Eevee
A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12277849/
It’s my story, jackass. I’m not required to put in line breaks. Go fuck yourself.
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People continue to pick the weirdest hills to die on. This person’s bio is also a trip.
Mr.CuriosityBunnyA response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/12278382/ Dear reader,I thank you for taking the time to not on read but to also review this story. This is not meant in any way to be clever. Just a way to pass an hour in class with a friend back in high school.
Thank you for sharing your opinion.
Sincerely,
Mr. Curiosity Bunny
What.
Also, someone’s writing a fic about a reality show that isn’t a satire?