secs ago(For future reference, you can continue a PM chain with no replies by selecting your PM in the outbox.)

https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/11834/165132256/1/World-Tags

You don’t have to do anything, but people would appreciate it if you made searches a little easier. But if the story genuinely does blend canons, it’s fine.

[I’m not going to change it because of minor things if it only bothers you.]

I never expected you to. But I will still say my opinion. That is the purpose of the review feature.

[There is only one Pokémon god.]

Uh… Groudon and Kyogre ring a bell? Dialga and Palkia? Ho-oh and Lugia? Arceus has very impressive feats attributed to it, but it’s not the only pokemon with god-like powers. A few of the other gods have chosen ones (or at least prophecies associated with them), but Arceus either does nothing while the world is being destroyed literally right under its nose (if you’re using game canon) or actively hates humanity at this point in time (if you’re using anime canon). If you have a specific reason to use Arceus then by all means, but you should be aware that it’s become really overplayed by now.

secs ago[I just realised that it autocorrects to it whenever I type it.]

That’s easily fixed if you edit your autocorrect.

[Arceus is known as the original one.]

In one specific religion in one specific region that is not mentioned anywhere despite said region being the single best resource on mythology in canon, yes. Just because something is a creator god doesn’t mean anyone cares; the creator gods were the villains of the Greek mythos, remember. Arceus definitely wouldn’t have my vote. Thing is a lazy dick, couldn’t even create a universe without outsourcing the labor to its kids.

If you want to argue this further, I’d like to request you do it in the thread: https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/11834/162324520/1/Pokeworld-Religion

secs agoIf you’re talking about the comma splices, your very second sentence is one:

[For a detective, it means that they always end up seeing a side that people often ignore, follow the cases of a Pokemon Detective.]

“Follow the cases of a pokemon detective” is a completely separate thought from “For a detective, it means that they always end up seeing a side that people often ignore.” The second comma should be a period here.

If you want a specific resources, the website Grammar Girl may be useful. I know there are many other online resources, but I don’t know names.

secs ago[Hm- to me it was pretty clear what happened, which is that a shipment of pokeballs that were being transferred was delayed, and those pokeballs contain the OCs.]

No, that isn’t clear. Regardless, that’s not the point of what I said. What is the PLOT? What is the story going to be ABOUT? What are its THEMES? Are there group or setting dynamics we can play off of? Those are the important questions we need to make characters. There’s no point in submitting a character if the story is never going to engage with their most interesting traits.

If you want wiggle room, SYOC is the wrong way to go about it. Most people who submit to SYOCs expect you to portray their exact character perfectly. It sounds like what you want is general character inspiration, in which case you should be looking to this thread: https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/11834/128021680/1/Character-Bio-Thread

Regardless, your character form is so general that you could have used a random generator. You made personality optional? Seriously? You can’t practice art by making other people do the sketches.