Dragon Quill

Aug 19WafflesnRamen

First off just want to say that this is an extremely helpful review but I’m not really familiar with the whole writing lingo. So thanks for the tip on “drabble”.

The writing program was the one capitalizing the pokemon names. At 3 a.m. I pretty much gave up wrestling the spell check and autocorrect and it seems I forgot to correct it on upload the next morning (Tight work schedule). Also thanks for the punctuation check! I’ll go ahead and fix those right now!
As for Team Plasma’s hostility and Jolty’s little comment, I do have plans for future chapters explaining why they act the way they do towards her. Although I think I may have to add something to this to help it become a bit clearer.

Again, Thank you for the help! It’s much appreciated!

Aug 19iLixer

Thanks for being my first reviewer.

I never thought about the capitalization. I’ll take that in mind. Thanks for linking that page.
Sorry about that comma splice. I didn’t even knew what that was so I looked it up. It’s a normal thing in spanish so I guess that was my problem.
But I could not find that “Im” without the apostrophe.
I’ll correct the mistakes and continue with the next chapter.

Thanks again for the review.

Aug 19FXCF

thank you, again, for the criticization. and i still can’t do a good story or spelling. it’s sad to see my own ideas go to absolute shit due to my grammar being even less than adequate.

Aug 19FantasiesEscapeFromReality

First, I want to say thank you for taking the time others don’t to point out these many flaws to me, so that I may fix them and provide a better reading experience. Second I want to say I’m rather ashamed of this piece now and feel I can do much better, so I will be removing it myself and scrapping the core but keeping the concept. I also have this story posted on Wattpad and have been writing its pieces during my free time from the Wattpad Moblie app; however, I was totally unaware of the harm it was doing to my story by using the app rather than Word like I am used to writing with. I wasn’t having much luck on Wattpad and decided to use my laptop to copy and paste (with fixes along the way) to move the story to be here on http://www.fanfiction.net as well to see if I could get any reviews or comments….Now I see why people were reading and leaving silently without a word.

I wanted to ask what you mean by second-person stories?

Aug 20Gamepro8321

Ok, Listen. I just write these for fun. If you don’t like/ cannot follow then don’t read. I have only been on this site for awhile. Also, if you have a problem with my grammar then ok. Last thing is that this is a fanfic. The writer has the power to change or manipulate things from the story. For example I cold make it so Guzma never joined team skull. This is what a fanfic is. So if you don’t like mine, then you may find another one.

Sincerely,
Gamepro8321

Aug 21BeBraverForMe

Hi thanks for informing me about my flaws in my way of formatting dialogues. Anyways I’ll try practicing my writing to be better, I’m still learning but thanks I’ll update my file.

Aug 21XXXHolly21XX

Thank you for your review on my story. I really appreciate readers like you who tell the truth instead of readers who lie. I will try much harder next time.

Thanks again!
:)