Dragon Quill

“I don’t want to sound offensive, but you did kind of offend me when you started explaining how dialogue works. I don’t want to sound rude, however. It’s just…I get embarrassed when people point out that simple stuff.”

“In no way whatsoever was that statement or my story for that matter, intended to be sexist. Your sarcasm(at least it appears that way through text) at the end there was offensive, and makes me feel unwelcome on the sight thus far(sad face).”

“PM the grammar analysis or leave me alone. But the last paragraph, that’s fine. That’s exactly what reviews are for, to show the author plot holes or things to improve, and provide suggestions.”

Not much today…or not much yet, but I want to get this batch out of the way so I can start the next review batch. (more…)

Brief update on one interaction! I continued speaking with XxCocoJaypeexX from yesterday. Many comments were exchanged, about things like why I reviewed and don’t I worry it’ll destroy people’s dreams.

(more…)

“When the time comes for change, I’d be more than happy to treat Pokemon as nothing but slave animals that fight to the death for us and our treated like dirt and aren’t given the privilege of a name that starts with a capitol letter. Not.”  (more…)

“In a one-shot that is focused solely on bringing out emotion, is cliché that bad?

The real question: was it written well or not? Did I express emotion well enough or not? Was it something one might enjoy reading or not? What did you like or not like?” (more…)

Not much! Need to review more to reap more.

(more…)

“If you have nothing nice to say about what I’m doing, don’t say anything at all.” (more…)

“Because I have a habit of capitalizing words I shouldn’t, outside of typing and in. I will keep doing it, because I don’t have the mental capacity to fix it myself.” (more…)

Consider this: “Go, pikachu, I choose you!” vs “Go, Pikachu, I choose you!”
Here, even though the animal is a pikachu (if you were to not treat it as a generic name), this specific pikachu’s name is “Pikachu.” It is the same as naming a dog “Dog.” (more…)

“Farla, you may hate my story but that does not mean I’ll change something I put my heart and soul into just for you.” (more…)

Almost nothing today, it’s rather nice. (more…)

“Are you sure you didn’t review the wrong story? It sounds more like you wanted to review the my little pony story that I wrote.” (more…)

Today’s copy-paste is brought to you by Firefox. Firefox: copies code almost like Chrome, but not quite. (more…)

“Fifth, I am aware my writing in this story is quite tedious and redundant. In this story my writing is as such because this story is being told from the mind of Aurora. There is little to no narrator involved in this story. Aurora just thinks this way, and I, as well as you if you’ll follow this story, should notice it change as the story continues.” (more…)