“Because I have a habit of capitalizing words I shouldn’t, outside of typing and in. I will keep doing it, because I don’t have the mental capacity to fix it myself.” (more…)
“If you have nothing nice to say about what I’m doing, don’t say anything at all.” (more…)
Not much! Need to review more to reap more.
“In a one-shot that is focused solely on bringing out emotion, is cliché that bad?
The real question: was it written well or not? Did I express emotion well enough or not? Was it something one might enjoy reading or not? What did you like or not like?” (more…)
“When the time comes for change, I’d be more than happy to treat Pokemon as nothing but slave animals that fight to the death for us and our treated like dirt and aren’t given the privilege of a name that starts with a capitol letter. Not.” (more…)
Brief update on one interaction! I continued speaking with XxCocoJaypeexX from yesterday. Many comments were exchanged, about things like why I reviewed and don’t I worry it’ll destroy people’s dreams.
Not much today…or not much yet, but I want to get this batch out of the way so I can start the next review batch. (more…)
“I don’t want to sound offensive, but you did kind of offend me when you started explaining how dialogue works. I don’t want to sound rude, however. It’s just…I get embarrassed when people point out that simple stuff.”
“In no way whatsoever was that statement or my story for that matter, intended to be sexist. Your sarcasm(at least it appears that way through text) at the end there was offensive, and makes me feel unwelcome on the sight thus far(sad face).”
“PM the grammar analysis or leave me alone. But the last paragraph, that’s fine. That’s exactly what reviews are for, to show the author plot holes or things to improve, and provide suggestions.”
“it’s my style and I was taught to write like that” (more…)
Thank you for your constructive criticism. But, their are a few things I’d like to address. Before I begin, I’d like to state I’m still extremely new to writing, and so grammar errors are to be expected. It is, after all, unedited. I also have a habit of capitalizing words I don’t need to.
Anyways, the only thing I want to say is the reason I’m asking for OC’s is because I felt like doing that for my first story. I never said I wasn’t capable of making them myself, I was just hoping to engross more people in the story. Adding other writers OC’s to the story doesn’t make it a terrible mess if you know how to work the characters into the storyline. After all, I already have 4 of the chapters written. But then again, I guess it depends on the story.
~Darkness46
“I’m super new and I can’t even handle the shift key! Also why are you suggesting I’m not super experienced handling submitted OCs?”
The first one was definitely the best today. (more…)
“If your grammar is so great then why are your stories full of flames.” (more…)
plus when I meant review and feedback I only meant did people like the store so far (more…)
“Plz explain this in english.” (more…)
“3) Don’t you dare review my plot with only ONE chapter out. I don’t even set up the plot until chapter three, and that’s barely a hint.” (more…)