Dragon Quill

Brief update on one interaction! I continued speaking with XxCocoJaypeexX from yesterday. Many comments were exchanged, about things like why I reviewed and don’t I worry it’ll destroy people’s dreams.

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Not much today…or not much yet, but I want to get this batch out of the way so I can start the next review batch. (more…)

“I don’t want to sound offensive, but you did kind of offend me when you started explaining how dialogue works. I don’t want to sound rude, however. It’s just…I get embarrassed when people point out that simple stuff.”

“In no way whatsoever was that statement or my story for that matter, intended to be sexist. Your sarcasm(at least it appears that way through text) at the end there was offensive, and makes me feel unwelcome on the sight thus far(sad face).”

“PM the grammar analysis or leave me alone. But the last paragraph, that’s fine. That’s exactly what reviews are for, to show the author plot holes or things to improve, and provide suggestions.”

“it’s my style and I was taught to write like that” (more…)

17h agoDarkness46A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10963077/

Thank you for your constructive criticism. But, their are a few things I’d like to address. Before I begin, I’d like to state I’m still extremely new to writing, and so grammar errors are to be expected. It is, after all, unedited. I also have a habit of capitalizing words I don’t need to.
Anyways, the only thing I want to say is the reason I’m asking for OC’s is because I felt like doing that for my first story. I never said I wasn’t capable of making them myself, I was just hoping to engross more people in the story. Adding other writers OC’s to the story doesn’t make it a terrible mess if you know how to work the characters into the storyline. After all, I already have 4 of the chapters written. But then again, I guess it depends on the story.

~Darkness46

“I’m super new and I can’t even handle the shift key! Also why are you suggesting I’m not super experienced handling submitted OCs?”


The first one was definitely the best today. (more…)

“If your grammar is so great then why are your stories full of flames.” (more…)

plus when I meant review and feedback I only meant did people like the store so far (more…)

“Plz explain this in english.” (more…)

“3) Don’t you dare review my plot with only ONE chapter out. I don’t even set up the plot until chapter three, and that’s barely a hint.” (more…)

It’s depressing to think that people are likely being so reasonable is because there’s so very few reviews at all. (more…)

“I have only recently got the hang of using semi-colons, but don’t really know when to use them in an appropriate situation and just put them in there to vary my punctuation. ” (more…)

Discover why it’s very important we use “juxtaposition” in conversation as often as possible! (more…)

Jan 3Hollystar122A response to your review at https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10939731/

The capitalization of Pokemon and each Pokemon species is correct, as can be seen on resources such as Bulbapedia and in the games. Same with the Professor thing, as it is a title.

Thanks for the grammar clarification. I heard the it’s and it is thing before, but since I never heard it again, I assumed that the person was incorrect or I misunderstood them.

As for the whole Legendary thing, I’ve already planned out what is to happen in terms of that, and it will not be an occurrence at the end of the story.

This is going to come up a lot, so I’ll just say this once: I hope Bulbapedia and everyone involved burn to death. The whole Charmander/Pokemon/Pokeball thing I could understand, but now it’s spread to the rest of English and I have stupid fuckers explaining to me that no, Professor and Doctor is always capitalized, Bulbapedia is an authority and so must be blindly obeyed in all things. I would like to give a special personalized fuck-you to the people who started the whole capitalization = “X method” thing and legitimatizing the idea there’s no right answer just do whatever the fuck you feel like.


Look at what you’ve done. (more…)

People seem to be actually responding in a way identifiable as human thought this year! It confuses and frightens me. (more…)