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Author Archives: St. Elmo's Fire
[25] The Other Pokereviews, Part 12
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 11
“Second off: the “Butt-raping.”
You are unfamiliar with my interpretation of the world of pokemon. I attempt to inject a heavy dose of reality into my work. After having applied social Darwinism to the very basis of pokemon, the world that developed from such an archetype shares far more in common with contemporary earth than it does with the canon’s fetching fantasy about benevolent monsters.
As such, eleven year old children exploring the hostile world that I envisioned would be subjected to real-world dilemmas and situations. The comment about arboks eating Red, as well as the comment about hobos butt-raping children, is introduced with a casual tone in order to dissuade my audience from the canon’s common lore.“
[25] The Other Pokereviews, Part 11
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 10
“I don’t think I’m THAT bad at English, but Google Translate has to be on my side sometimes ;).”
[25] The Other Pokereviews, Part 10
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 9
From the “I wanted to make her less slutty” author: “I thank you for the criticism, as it will help me become a better writer… but was saying “you’re disgusting” really necessary?”
[25] The Other Pokereviews, Part 9
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 8
“uhh could you explain what N means?”
[25] The Other Pokereviews, Part 8
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The Other Pokeauthors, Part 7
Pretty chill responses this time.
[25] The Other Pokereviews, Part 7
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 6
“I did it at 10:00 while half asleep, i’ll do a better one next time”
[25] The Other Pokereviews, Part 6
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 5
“I was about to talk about how your review mainly focused on my grammar which I know definitely needs work when it comes to Pokémon, and not at all about the overall story, but then another review came in about the story, and no grammar, so both reviews met equilibrium there.”