Suckered a revenge reviewer into giving me actual criticism! Like water from a stone, usefulness eventually trickles forth.
Category: Pokemon Author Replies
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 88
Quiet today.
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 89
“I also thought [past tense] was normally how people wrote their stories… But you know, the people in my writing group are published… so I just didn’t say anything, because they were published and all big and mighty, and I am just a small fanfiction writer. Like this is an example they yelled at me for:
My writing: She swung her axe with a mighty roar, colliding with her enemy and bashing into their armor.
Their example: She swings her axe roaring loudly, hitting her enemy as it broke their armor.”
o_o
Pokeauthors Special Spotlight: The War For Attention
An author gets really invested in making me read their anime fic.
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 90
“I know how to kick an idiot’s ass. But I’ll give you a chance to stop acting childish and start acting like a grown up woman. It would be better if you don’t reply”
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 91
“A psychiatrist deals with mental illness. A DOCTOR prescribes medication. Actually RESEARCH these things BEFORE putting them in your reviews”
Pokeauthors Special Spotlight: Pokeworld History
An actual positive spotlight today! I got to have an extended conversation about the history of the pokeworld and the potential influence of pokemon on certain institutions.
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 92
“On a side note, the first paragraph of your review does seem to be rather familiar, though I must certainly be mistaken on such observations since you are *clearly* a person of such detail and would never think to lead anyone to believe that any form of plagiarism is to be seen within your reviews.”
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 93
Korrasami 88 continues to be the gift that keeps on giving. Other people are generally polite.
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 94
“So just because most things arent capitalized means it cant be read? Thats really stupid. Its basically saying how you cant read texting bc nothing is capitalized or something. But fine ill just capitalize all of that if people cant read one name or something not capitalize!!!”
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 95
“As I am not a professional I will ask you to keep in mind that I am learning by doing this. So although your feedback made some points which I could learn about.. the way in which you said it wasn’t nice or encouraging.“
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 96
“I couldn’t care less how you feel about my grammar use. I’m having fun and that’s what matters.”
And another author insists that I’m doing reviewing wrong without providing anything new.
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 97
“If I built, and designed, a beautiful mansion and it collapses down a sinkhole the whole world will know.”
Edit: A new revenge review snuck in at the last minute!
Pokeauthors Special Spotlight: Another Verse
Someone from back when I first started discovered I was still at it and gave me the same non-advice everyone always does.
The Other Pokeauthors, Part 98
“It’s amazing that you don’t know anything about writing.” Responses are otherwise appreciative, however.