Dragon Quill

“The person I wrote this story with wanted us to use master when referring to the male character and I had no objections. It has jack-shit to do with power-play or the like and the word was simply used as a means of not having a name for him. It was either master or owner, and my partner thought master sounded better, end of story. Whether or not it’s creepy is a subjective issue that varies wildly from person to person.”

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Suckered a revenge reviewer into giving me actual criticism! Like water from a stone, usefulness eventually trickles forth.

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Quiet today.

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“I also thought [past tense] was normally how people wrote their stories… But you know, the people in my writing group are published… so I just didn’t say anything, because they were published and all big and mighty, and I am just a small fanfiction writer. Like this is an example they yelled at me for:

My writing: She swung her axe with a mighty roar, colliding with her enemy and bashing into their armor.

Their example: She swings her axe roaring loudly, hitting her enemy as it broke their armor.”

o_o

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An author gets really invested in making me read their anime fic.

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“I know how to kick an idiot’s ass. But I’ll give you a chance to stop acting childish and start acting like a grown up woman. It would be better if you don’t reply”

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An actual positive spotlight today! I got to have an extended conversation about the history of the pokeworld and the potential influence of pokemon on certain institutions.

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“On a side note, the first paragraph of your review does seem to be rather familiar, though I must certainly be mistaken on such observations since you are *clearly* a person of such detail and would never think to lead anyone to believe that any form of plagiarism is to be seen within your reviews.”

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Korrasami 88 continues to be the gift that keeps on giving. Other people are generally polite.

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“So just because most things arent capitalized means it cant be read? Thats really stupid. Its basically saying how you cant read texting bc nothing is capitalized or something. But fine ill just capitalize all of that if people cant read one name or something not capitalize!!!”

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“As I am not a professional I will ask you to keep in mind that I am learning by doing this. So although your feedback made some points which I could learn about.. the way in which you said it wasn’t nice or encouraging.“

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“I couldn’t care less how you feel about my grammar use. I’m having fun and that’s what matters.”

And another author insists that I’m doing reviewing wrong without providing anything new.

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“If I built, and designed, a beautiful mansion and it collapses down a sinkhole the whole world will know.”

Edit: A new revenge review snuck in at the last minute!

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